Reviews for Jane's Coterie
divyvicki chapter 14 . 10/5
Great job for your first story. Thanks so much for finishing it!
divyvicki chapter 13 . 10/5
Wow! Glad they got there in time!
divyvicki chapter 12 . 10/5
I don’t know how this is going to be wrapped up in just Two more chapters.
divyvicki chapter 11 . 10/2
At least she’ll have some money from the house to live on.
divyvicki chapter 10 . 10/2
Was t expecting that to happen
divyvicki chapter 9 . 9/26
Looks like there is a serial killer stalking the girls! I'm betting on James!
divyvicki chapter 6 . 9/21
So I'm thinking James might be the stalker!
divyvicki chapter 5 . 9/21
Wonderful!
divyvicki chapter 4 . 9/21
Hope Edward handles the Royce situation!
sue1zide chapter 14 . 9/15
All's well that ends well.
divyvicki chapter 3 . 9/13
They are so cute together.
divyvicki chapter 2 . 9/13
What a sweet thing for him to do!
divyvicki chapter 1 . 9/13
This story was in a list obtained at the TFMU in Nashville. Loved the first chapter.
jk chapter 10 . 5/19
the steps you've taken to make bella vunerable are toooo much! the cam guy making her feel like a whore...bella crying about it...then crying about her mom...then her letting Royce take her money...then the stalker guy...now her house...its fucking ridiculous...she can be small and feminine and in need of protecting without all that shit...this is getting so dumb I don't think I can read it anymore...and that "lap dance" seemed erratic and weird...like I said, it doesn't translate well.
jk chapter 9 . 5/19
what kind of idiot doesn't keep track of how much shes paying on a loan? that's just stupid...I have NO respect for bella right now...and then she said she loves Edward...LOL yaaaaaaaa you've known him for like 3 days...you stupid fucking whore.
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