Reviews for Unborn Secrets
Pandalovelove chapter 18 . 4/15
I absolutely love to be your editor. I am an upcoming professional writer send your newest chapters to to get your fanfictions edited on point
EmeraldBlossom17 chapter 18 . 4/3
BookLover12 chapter 18 . 3/6/2016
I have a friend that's a language arts teacher, she's fantastic at editing, obviously. I could inform her about being a beta editor, but I don't know how I can relay the information necessary via review.
BookLover12 chapter 3 . 3/6/2016
Sakura is 21 but Karin and Sasuke are teens? Can you fix that?
Gaaralover25 chapter 18 . 2/11/2016
This story is just sad I mean what happened to sakura is so so sad... But u were good with the detail and everything I loved it
HavenxHawthorn chapter 18 . 9/18/2015
I LOVED the part where Naruto started packing, Made my day!
luvsasusaku.97 chapter 18 . 6/13/2015
Great! Love it!
sakura fan chapter 8 . 10/13/2014
OMG! Samurai is so awsome
Nalu over nali any day chapter 18 . 9/15/2014
Yay 2of my fave things happened karin bashing and sasusaku
sakura.souen chapter 18 . 7/30/2014
omg! i loved Naruto's reaction o sakura being in labor! it was really funny... and most likely how i would react as well, i mean those things are so big that your brain just doesn't register it right away :) (though minus the packing!) i really liked this fanfic ;) thou sakura's past is sad!
Maizme chapter 12 . 4/26/2014
Finished reading and I LOVED IT! Great... (: i loved their ringtones... Loll
Guest chapter 14 . 4/26/2014
I am really enjoying this story... I have just finished chpter 13.. Thinking (oh lord, what is Karin up to now..hehe) Story is Awesome! :)
sorry chapter 18 . 12/1/2013
honestly this story was really bad.
Karin had a right to be mad at sakura for what she thinks she did, i can totally see her wanting revenge hell i can see anyone wanting to take revenge on someone that ruined their whole fucking life even though it was not sakuras fault but karin didnt know that so if you think about it Karin, Sakura, and everyone else mixed up in it are the victims of Sakura's dad and his wrong doings
so i really dont get why everyone wanted her to die and hated her for her trying to get back at the person the supposedly ruined her life and family.

from your friend,
me )
kiko280 chapter 4 . 10/12/2013
What's about sakura's past?
kiko280 chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
What was sakuras secret? Will sasuke and Sakura ever get back together?
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