Reviews for A Moment Between Family
CraftyNotepad chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Perfect and reflective, yet the show's strength is comedy. Consider injecting this element. Mayhaps Matthew doesn't want to give up "his" rings, keeps putting them in his mouth, or uses them as belts or crowns on his action figures out in the sandbox.

Speaking of reflective, Raviv finally gets the girl. About time. Didn't think he was going to be back for the second season, just like another member of Rita's garage band, but it looks as if he's found a home once again.

Very clean structured writing, making your presentation easy to follow.

Best

CraftyNotepad

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funnygirlOoObroadwaybaby chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Are you gonna write more? No, let me rephrase, PLEASE write more! :D I love this story! AWESOME!