Reviews for like a sea
FullMetal Alchemistress chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Uhm...chat speak-BAD.
orangemice311 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
What is this? Is this like a prologue? And why on earth would you write a story using that idiotic chat speak? If you start to spell things right, and use real words, this is a pretty good start to a story. I like the sea analogy.
the-english-rain-is-falling chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
yet again use corrext vocabulary, spell the words out instead of using text language.
zammierox chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
do these have the actual characters? umm good start?
tulips-are-everlasting chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
huh...very...short...