Reviews for Revolving
YakyuuBaka chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
"Like a super-watchful Italian Hawk."

LMAO! You are a wonderful, gifted writer and don't you ever dare to stop writing!

"And one day Yamamoto is watching Gokudera watching Yamamoto..."

This is a really interesting way of stringing words together, and you are the only person I've seen so far pull it off.

Only teeny thing that I thought didn't fit was "...because IT IS uncomfortable, so fucking uncomfortable." It made me re-read the whole paragraph just to make sure that it was Yamamoto that was feeling the discomfort. Maybe I've just been pre-conditioned to associate the f-bomb with Gokudera (alone, lol) in the same sentence, but I thought that Yamamoto even thinking the word (or feeling like saying the word) borders on OOC. But then again, that's just me :P

...So, follow up on this? "But that's another story."

Kudos! (_)b
Tsukasa Kizuna chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
So sweet! 3 Me loves.

Do tell that other story )
Hana1225 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009

Gokudera is like a jealous wife
Ryokou chapter 1 . 10/23/2009

Oh my god. :)

The formatting for this one was a little off, and you might want to space it out a bit.

That kinda annoyed me at first, but you have a serious talent for writing. Some of those lines were pure gold. _

I'd really like it if you wrote more 8059 soon!