Reviews for Two Worlds Collide
Emmaline3 chapter 17 . 1/29/2013
Enjoyed your version...actually happy Edward faded into
the fog, he showed himself as the whispy character he
really was for her. Cute story!
Emmaline3 chapter 16 . 1/29/2013
Jake's comment, "I've loved you since the sandbox...",
triggered a song in my mind, 'I could've met you in a
sandbox, I could've passed you on the sidewalk. Could I
have missed my chance and watched you walk away?...",
from Room For Squares, John Mayer's "Love Song for No One"
Great song, btw...but Jake's really a darling and I've
often wondered why so many disliked him - He was at least
up front with his love for Bella, however dismayed by her'
obsession with Edward, did all he could to get her back.
Emmaline3 chapter 3 . 1/28/2013
Uh oh...I hear the 'Twilight' theme song from the T.V.
mystery theatre days! Something's up with those mossy
shoes by the door. I've got a new story for my grand
daughter to read - she will love this ;-)
Emmaline3 chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
The words of your first chapter have had the very same
affect on me as when I first began the fascinating trip
into Twilight-world...just like you said! I want to
plow right on through without stopping to drop you a
note, I'm so eager to read your story! Excellent start -
I'm captured!
Obsessive Behaviors chapter 17 . 6/18/2011
Coming late to the dance, I found the Avant Garde Awards listed your most recent work as a must read. So, as logic prevails, I’m starting with your first piece and moving forward in chronological order.

Unique, interesting writing, as this story incorporated a Smut Factor of 10 (SF10) with a nude dream sequence Edward and the combined sexual goodness of Jacob (sadly no appendage details). In its conclusion I found the plot twist incorporating Maggie/Jacob with a shared a dream and purple lingerie a rewarding wrap up? I’m looking forward to exploring Here’s To Strategy followed by the Power of Ten.
sekoehler chapter 17 . 10/14/2010
Interesting and very different. I'm always looking for fics that are out of the ordinary, and I absolutely found it in yours. Like you, I am Team Edward all the way, but I just totally fell in love with your Jake. He was so sweet. Well done!
jarielynn chapter 6 . 7/25/2010
Oh! That would suck! I hate when dreams get interrupted. Damn.
jarielynn chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
But this is still the Jacob that gets between bella/ Maggie and Edward. And he does sound a bit familiar- played w/ cars instead of mud pies... yeah. ;) Still here, still reading, still happy.
jarielynn chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
I saw this rec'd at Twific Promotions. Sounded different and interesting and so far I can say I am liking it. Just a little ground work being laid here, but drew me in enough to continue reading.
Selita1990 chapter 14 . 2/14/2010
Oh shit!

I must say I love me some Edward.

haha. too bad he's fictional.

I must also apologize for my... disappearance?

Haven't had a lot of time for the computer, or FF lately.

This is as far as I can read tonight i'm afraid.

I'll get back to the others ASAP!

I hope you're doing well Laura!

Selita
Lawliet Jeevas-Keehl chapter 12 . 2/9/2010
awsome!
darkangel-RR chapter 17 . 1/28/2010
wow.. i super love ur story... i bow down to u... wow... its awesome... i actually found ur story by chance and i will just have to say that its such a great opportunity to read ur story.. damn u have a gift.. u have to continue writing to be able to touch other person's heart. ur story just made my birthday happier... i love it... tc
3red chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
UPDATE SON! this is so good. too good in fact.
Selita1990 chapter 12 . 12/13/2009
So good!

-sigh-

Edward.

I really want Edward to win, Em's heart.

BUT

alas, I am going with a little common sense here.

Logically, Jacob is the she'll end up with.

but, I say: "Screw logic!"

hehe

:P

Can't wait for more.
Selita1990 chapter 11 . 11/22/2009
OMFG!

Ugh...

but I must admit.

I want more Edward. haha.

I know he's... her.. fantasy.. and all.

but im good with a fantasy as long as its Edward.

haha.
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