Reviews for A Marriage Most Convenient |
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drucindastorm chapter 54 . 1/5/2019 it was so beautiful |
LunaFlos chapter 50 . 12/20/2018 Beautiful story! thanks for sharing it! |
LunaFlos chapter 11 . 12/14/2018 This was hilarious! |
HPforever2018-3 chapter 35 . 12/5/2018 This is going to be the last chapter for me. I think the wedding is a good way to end this charade. What a soap opera! Drama and slapstick in a rollercoaster motion that is making me seasick. So why read 35 chapters? Well, it is a great plot and the first chapters (until their fake engagement) are fun and a joy to read. After that both (especially) Hermione and Draco start acting like immature 12year olds. It is like watching a car crash. You don't want to look, but you do. The bright spot in this story is Alice the four year old girl, who acts and often talks like a 50 year old granny. She is a sweatheart! Hermione is a traincrash of bad decisions and really bad communications. Brightest witch my behind. Not in this fic I tell you. Draco starts of like a fun person, that ends up like a pouting juvenile. It is not becoming. Saying it all is my favorite moment so far in this fic: Ron's saying he is ashamed of them all! I get the feeling. Sometimes less is more. And this fic could use a lot less drama and a lot less slapstick. It is a great plot after all! |
HPforever2018-3 chapter 18 . 12/4/2018 I am not sure, why I am hooked on this story? Those two are so immature, I want to scream. However Alice is a gem! |
Guest chapter 13 . 11/19/2018 Someone make a movie. I want to watch Lucius Malfoy carry a pink elephant with a ploka dot bow. Thankyou for writing this. I am still on chapter 13 and I am loving it. |
Shantigal chapter 1 . 11/20/2018 Hot damn! |
Guest chapter 45 . 11/6/2018 This story ended 10 chapters ago in my opinion you should have started a new story with Alice and James. |
dsmrm2023 chapter 54 . 11/4/2018 I truly loved every word written in this story. Bravo! Thank you for this! |
Guest chapter 36 . 9/22/2018 I love this story. Specially the way draco's character is portrayed. Also I love the quotes in the beginning of each chapter. So far Awesome. |
twlightbella chapter 49 . 9/23/2018 Wedding night |
twlightbella chapter 48 . 9/23/2018 James and Alice getting married |
twlightbella chapter 38 . 9/23/2018 Aww yay |
twlightbella chapter 36 . 9/23/2018 Aww cute |
weeliciousmania chapter 54 . 9/13/2018 Malfoy First Borns and Billiard Tables |