I love his interaction with Alice! Too cute and funny.

I really tried to love this but the constant angst just threw me off. Thanks anyways.

so, I'm absolutely in love with this story, I went to your profile and saw that you moved to another site. I googled the site but saw that site was shut down due to the owner of it passing. I was wondering if you were going to up date this or even if you had another place where your story is at. im soooooo invested now and its amazing!

This story is boring and without a plot

I HATE THIS FANFICTION, WHY DIDN'T SHE JUST SAY IT? WHAT HELL I HATE THESE STORIES THAT KEEP STALLING TO SPEAK THE OBVIOUS!

My God, why did hermione act like a perfect slut about Alice doing magic? Can't she give her own daughter a vote of confidence? Hermione is getting tired of these petty attitudes

The quotes at the beginning are a real chuckle.

They are so cute, I wonder how she gonna react

Omg what's happening

I love your story, just its better to put more space between the diffrents pov

I wish more description

Alice is so sweeet

Woooooooooow so original

Hermoso
Tengo un nudo en la garganta
Que capitulo mas conmovedor

Love this so much