Reviews for The Wrath of a Woman Scorned
giving 33 chapter 18 . 12/20/2024
love the story great chapter flow
Evelinhaimo1 chapter 10 . 11/23/2024
This is excellent storytelling. Enjoyable story with interesting characters, You have a talent and you're using it right. I liked the character of Gaara As an artist, I can create the character art of Gaara in a good price. If you're interested feel free to reach me on my social accounts which is in my bio
death390 chapter 18 . 11/16/2024
Ok i almost didn't put this on follow considering it will be sometime in 3rd/4th quarter next year when you update again from the looks of things, but that part bit sold me for the moment. Still needs the other issues fixed as stated in previous review before I would consider rereading which limits this to a 5 currently, I do see potential for a 7 or even 8 though.
death390 chapter 10 . 11/16/2024
Ch7 definitely needs those 2 scenes fleshed out and put in their right order. The order makes a major difference in how Inari would take the advice, naruto then Kakashi tempers the advice and potential fear of her; Kakashi then naruto gives Inari find to put the advice in as it's given possibly enhancing the fear.

Also in this chapter sakura mentions naruto as the nuclear deterrent but that means she must have been told their status but it hasn't been mentioned yet in story. There is a lot of smiling around and it makes for hard reading particularly with no transition paragraph. Like what else happened on the bridge, was the Gato lake cannon or did he show up. Did they leave after Gao died or stay to complete the bridge, etc..

There are also some wrong word errors like using err instead of air in chapter one. Still interested but could use a cleanup pass
Sons of death chapter 18 . 11/4/2024
I love the talks between people in this.
Nyctophilicme chapter 12 . 9/1/2024
Kashi!
Nyctophilicme chapter 6 . 8/31/2024
This is so good!
Nyctophilicme chapter 4 . 8/31/2024
That poem is so great.
Nyctophilicme chapter 3 . 8/31/2024
Oh oh oh, this fic is so interesting. The beginning part was so much like a horror movie.
Leaf Ranger chapter 18 . 8/10/2024
Heh heh heh, that dude is effed. Very, very effed. Tenten ain't playing around.

Nice to see ehr and Termari being chummy here. Nice indeed.
Owlfurret chapter 18 . 7/29/2024
This is new and different. I like it.
Kaia chapter 18 . 7/17/2024
well worth the wait! I HOPE WRITE OUT THE ENTIRE MATCH FOR TENTEN vs SHIGERI! that would be incredibly entertaining!
AchroniaSamara chapter 12 . 7/5/2024
I could actually more see her with Gaara currently
Shadow Walker of Fire chapter 18 . 7/4/2024
Nice chapter. Good luck with this arc, you’re going to need it.
Paul Lenzen chapter 18 . 6/30/2024
Great chapter
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