Reviews for The Wrath of a Woman Scorned |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love the story great chapter flow |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is excellent storytelling. Enjoyable story with interesting characters, You have a talent and you're using it right. I liked the character of Gaara As an artist, I can create the character art of Gaara in a good price. If you're interested feel free to reach me on my social accounts which is in my bio |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok i almost didn't put this on follow considering it will be sometime in 3rd/4th quarter next year when you update again from the looks of things, but that part bit sold me for the moment. Still needs the other issues fixed as stated in previous review before I would consider rereading which limits this to a 5 currently, I do see potential for a 7 or even 8 though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch7 definitely needs those 2 scenes fleshed out and put in their right order. The order makes a major difference in how Inari would take the advice, naruto then Kakashi tempers the advice and potential fear of her; Kakashi then naruto gives Inari find to put the advice in as it's given possibly enhancing the fear. Also in this chapter sakura mentions naruto as the nuclear deterrent but that means she must have been told their status but it hasn't been mentioned yet in story. There is a lot of smiling around and it makes for hard reading particularly with no transition paragraph. Like what else happened on the bridge, was the Gato lake cannon or did he show up. Did they leave after Gao died or stay to complete the bridge, etc.. There are also some wrong word errors like using err instead of air in chapter one. Still interested but could use a cleanup pass |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the talks between people in this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kashi! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That poem is so great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh oh oh, this fic is so interesting. The beginning part was so much like a horror movie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh heh heh, that dude is effed. Very, very effed. Tenten ain't playing around. Nice to see ehr and Termari being chummy here. Nice indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is new and different. I like it. |
![]() ![]() well worth the wait! I HOPE WRITE OUT THE ENTIRE MATCH FOR TENTEN vs SHIGERI! that would be incredibly entertaining! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could actually more see her with Gaara currently |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Good luck with this arc, you’re going to need it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |