| Reviews for The Wrath of a Woman Scorned |
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   IncompleteNarrative chapter 1 . 10/23/2009 so aki is naru awesome. i like her character hianta seems to have no confindence issues with tha ine tora signed anyway good story continue plz ja ne |
| averageblackmage chapter 1 . 10/23/2009 great fic love the female naruto and hinata by the way i hope to see more, what the pairing gonna be please don t let be sasuke |
| Tachi Kagahara chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 okthis is a really go start i really like where it is going one thing jiraiya only wrote one book putside of the icha icha series please find a way to make that book make sense like idk written for her by jiraiya and given to her by the hokage or she found it or something but please don't let that be a book in stores cuz the one book that he wrote that was not porn was a key thing in the naming of naruto so please stay somewhat true to that |
| sui chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 way to go! its great! |
| Johnny boy chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 Love it so far, Will Aki love scaring them (the village pepole)and perhaps use ther fear agenst when they are not honset to her or just prank them alot with a nasty spine? Is Aki gonna be evil or just showing them her POV? Plz don't make her a missing nin and give Sakura some backbone(perhaps gain some over time)jet not being a bit*h as inn a real team mate for Aki and Sasuke. Is Aki so without emotions that she can fit in root or does she just keep them cloes to heart? |
| Hijokugei chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 Well, regardles, you started the thing with a fair amount of badassery. I personally have never been a fan of Fem!Naru unless he (she?) is in potentially compromising positions with male characters, but you have piqued my interest. Also, I felt that more background in a less verse-like and metaphorical manner would have been helpful. |