Reviews for The Pirate and the Bride
Lotte chapter 10 . 4/8
This story is soooo good, your an amazing writter please continue!
Guest chapter 10 . 3/24
Dont be so modest and keep on writing stkries here js a suggestion fod a title forbidden lovers
DaDrackon chapter 10 . 12/31/2013
update
Hinamori Amu-San chapter 10 . 12/20/2013
I think you should just leave it. And write a new one. :)
LaughingSpades chapter 10 . 11/20/2013
please write more this is a good story
takininja13 chapter 10 . 5/25/2013
if you fell you need to fix the story go ahead and fix it i know i love it and if you can make it better then you are a writing god
meromerein chapter 10 . 12/23/2012
Hmm, the plot is okay. It's interesting! The writing has little mistakes, if you wish to redo I'd suggest following the same plot but editting whatever to your contendment. In the end it is your choice.
meromerein chapter 3 . 12/23/2012
By this chapter I was kind of amused at how poor Tadase is alone on the royalties side.. though Kairi has yet to be shown.

Well so far it's been pretty interesting :p I want moreeee!
Ai chapter 10 . 11/3/2012
Wow I really like it don't delete it ! plz. (人;) ai
otaku-hime20 chapter 10 . 11/4/2012
Please do make an attempt at rewriting this story, I can promise you that I'd be more than excited to read it. I hardly find any good Romance/Fantasy stories now a days in the Shugo Chara section of the Anime/Manga Fanfics. Not that the others aren't any good, its just that this story stood out much more than the others. :) Anyways, that is all I'd like to say and I love your stories! Please keep on writing, for the sake of the IkutoxAmu fans out there!
-otaku-hime20-
nekogirl017 chapter 8 . 9/29/2012
OH! and did I mention that this is currently my favorite story! Well second favorite but STILL! ITS STILL AWESOME! and I've read a LOT of fanfiction and this is still one of my favorites! I haven't even had a chance to put all the story's I've read and liked on my profile yet! They're on this list in my room. I'm just to lazy to track them all down right now. ANYWAYS KEEP WRITING!
nekogirl017 chapter 10 . 9/29/2012
KEEP WRITING THIS STORY! DONT ERASE IT! KEEP IT UP AND UPDATE! MY SISTER AND I BOTH LOVE THIS STORY AND YOU SOOOOOO MUCH! KEEP IT UP AND PLEASE KEEP WRITING! oh and pleeeaaasssseee update soon! *looks at you with puppy dog eyes*
xxxCatsOfTheShadowsxxx chapter 10 . 8/30/2012
Well I think u should at least delete these then post new ones, but it's ur choice in the end.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/26/2012
yes please hurey i what to read more
BlackGothicPrincess chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
no, no u didn't. you kidnapped her and tied her to the mast of a ship for a night (oh, did i mention you KIDNAPPED HER?) yeah, just wanted to put that out there.
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