Reviews for Observe
Mitomi chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
If I was Karen, I wouldn't be able to talk to them again!
Sleepingkit chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I Wuv this story! Hearts! I love how you put Karen's perspective in it, and the part about the house being on fire and what not, excellennnttt! The cute little parts of KennyxKevin was awesome as well ;D
Angecael Gliorixx chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
8'( It was so cuuute. Poor Karen.. Atleast the parents don't know..
redstars-x chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Loved it!
cherophobia chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
"The two of them were aware they were playing with fire. But what they considered to be the spark on the end of a matchstick was more like a house fire, and all the exits were blocked. They just couldn't see it through black rolling smoke clouds, stinging their eyes and clogging their lungs."

loved the entire thing, but that little bit really stood out. great comparison and just... just... gah! you know o.o

i adore the way you write about their subtle little affectionate acts toward each other :)
Feathershin chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Adorable :3
Bethany C. MacKenzie chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
ohh. hot. i did expect it to be...way more explicit, though. but that's alright. nothing like a dash of slash!incest to put a smile (albeit the kinda twisted, totally /wrong/ kind) on your face. yarr. one thing i noticed: they kinda talk like hillbillies. was that intentional? XD

- beth m.

ps. i'm in a screw-caplitalization mood today. haha. C:
NotebookChen chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
i LOVE gay incest. dont know why.
Tia Paes chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
I want to hate this but... damn... it's good!

Great story.