|Reviews for My Brother: ON HOLD|
| A11YouN33d chapter 1 . 3/26
| Mara Jade chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
The current 911 system was not put into place until the late 1960's, and a rural area would not be likely to have an ambulance service.
Bella's family would have to be incredibly rich to own a truck during that time period. Also, based on the social laws of the time a woman would most likely have not been allowed to drive a vehicle, much less "borrow" someone else's vehicle and drive it to another state.
| Hero Dean chapter 6 . 9/20/2014
this is some funny shit right here
| devil's daughter chapter 6 . 4/16/2014
Totally love the story so far but you should make some more chapters ''
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/17/2014
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/24/2013
this shit is funny keep writing this
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/7/2013
Please please update the story soon, it's funny
| jenn008 chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
| Belieber Twihard chapter 8 . 12/9/2012
Plz plz update this I love it
| Obscured Angel chapter 6 . 11/17/2012
This story is so funny. :D
| Obscured Angel chapter 4 . 11/17/2012
Funny chapter, thanks for the laugh :)
| Littlecosma001 chapter 8 . 10/20/2012
Pretty please with a jasper on top update!
| MCR Killjoys chapter 8 . 9/9/2012
please write soon
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/21/2012
| smileynight chapter 8 . 4/22/2012
please please update i am in love with this story and i love jasper and bella and peter and charlotes relationship!