Reviews for Harry's fantasy
Fancy-Hart chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
hey i was readin ur ff, and i noticed something (please dnt think me rude to point it out)

...if you think for one moment I would want anyone else then your stupider than I gave you credit for...

Stupider isnt correct, the word doesnt exsist,and asan educated professor, especially one who is proud of that and regarding the point he is trying to make, it would make more sense for him to say "you're even more thick headed" or "numbskulled" or "stupid/thick" though to be honest he is a man who use more brutality in his words than most men do in their physical actions so the previous suggestions might be better. )

please dnt think im trying to mean, if id done something id like someone to point out to me )


Neeshack chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Wow! . . . . Bloody Hell! Love it...
DemonsLullaby chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
omg! yayz! the ending was PERFECT! lol

it should be continued, in my opinion!
IkashaRashel chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
O.o All I can say is WOW . Wonder what Sev's fantasy is...
Lukie15 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Okay. You need to do a sequel. Severus' fantasy! That would be so cool.

This was an amazingly awesome story. Fantastic work. )
PrincessAstra00 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
I loved it! Hope you continue! Two Severus... *fans herself* was way hot!
Auroras Jenkins chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Nice very nice. like harry's display of power.
themrs chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Hot! Excellent smutty oneshot! We def need more! My favorite pairing!
Adaptive chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
HAHAHA, that story was fantastic :D please tell me there is a sequel! I would love to know what Snape's fantasy is
Yggi Marauder chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
CONTINUE! i wanna know Severus' fantasy!
SnowKissYuki chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
wow that was hot at a very fast pace. i don't think i could ever keep up lol (pun) anyways thanx for sharing and i hope you continue with this for i am very curious as to what Severus' fantasy would be.
somethingjustlikethat chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Oh my! This is so hot. Mm, two Sevs having sex with Harry would be fantastic. Yum yum. *dreams*
HersheyKissesLove chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
you should so make another chapter! great one though!
anybody101 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
PLEASE! tell me your continuing this story. I can't wait to see what Severus' fantasy is :) Great story.
LillianaSnape212 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Please please please continue! I would love to hear sev's fantasy. Great Story!
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