You're an excellent writer. You have a gift for giving characters dimension. "..." did have a point about the plot being overdone. I personally think you wrote it well. However, bashing reviewers that don't sing high praises of your story and encouraging others to do so is just petty.

WOW! AMAZING STORY!

I really cant wait for an update, this fic really had suspense and action!

I like the characterisation, of both the OC and Logan (You seem to have logans character perfect - amazing - *wonders* how many time have you watched the film? :D )also i like the structure and writing style- cant wait for more chapters!

BLAZE

Thanks Toto...

I hope the second story takes the characters further. I would have many bone of contention to pick with the disgruntled reviewer.

The idea of original characters being a bad idea...(wondering, personally, how Marvel could have built the X-Men's world so fully, if they hadn't constantly added new characters.

And the way the grouser missed all the important plot lines...namely her temporal ability, and Xavier's and Wolverine's stated doubts about the resumption of a romance before deciding to complain about what isn't there.

I would have those things and more to discuss with the reviewer...but then again I don't worry about reviews that come from someone with the, oh so original moniker of "..."

My opinion is...if you're too feeble-minded to come up with any kind of signature...then you wouldn't make a very good, or intelligent, conversationalist.

Thanks for your support toto...I hope I won't disappoint you.

'Reviewer' (previous post) may have to eat those words AFTER reading "The Night of the Mutants"

I think you made something out of this introductory fic.

Direct your eyes on to the next indulgence!

~Toto~

Okay, I'm getting tired of this.

Everywhere I turn, there are stories about some lost, lonely teenage girl having some miraculously perfect romance with Logan. Usually, I wouldn't mind, but this is just one too many. "Charlie" happens to be about seventy years old, so unless this girl dates guys fifty years older than her, a romance (or ex-romance) between them is NOT possible. And Logan isn't stupid enough to fall in love with, or accept, every darn girl he meets, so Logan/Original character stories are very hard to write, and as far as I can see, you've done a *bad* job of it.

wow i really like how it's turning out right more!

wow never saw that coming is some thing new but hey i hope you contine to do more fics