Reviews for Engine 17
Sadie1787 chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
I'm really startinf to like this story now I'm wondering who's POV is it in the prologe?
nexxus123 chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
Wow this story keeps getting better and better. I could just imagine edward's nerves etc as he made his way to the station.

I loved all the details - like how Ben was short, probably hired for the small space rescues.

I didn't catch on at first when the guys mentioned the shower in the corner- now of course it makes perfect sense. So Bella is the engineer! Friggin' brilliant!

I love how Jasper, Emmett, Jake, etc are Edward's collegues- amazing set up.

Edward is so cocky it's great for B to put him in his place. That bikini and cut off shorts thing was so funny...but now it's not just edward that's turned on, bella is too.

The description of E hosing down the trunk under the sun was a stunning description.

The sexual tension is great and I'm glad B is a strong, smart woman.

I'm in love with this story- perfect chapter!
mauralee88 chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
Instant chemistry? I like it.

I really love your fire/fire fighter facts.
tigger5600 chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
awesome chapter! loved it! and i so knew that was her at the airport! lol... cant wait to see more! :)
Legolas' Girl 31 chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
Awesome chapter, I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

LittleLea05 chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
aww love me some fire boys..hehe...and the fact that Bella is basically Edward's boss this time around..hehe...the fire engine washing was awesome I would totally drool if I say his body too it! I want to beta chapter 5 already dammit hehe
tigger5600 chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
really cool so far..cant wait to see what happens next.. love it! :)
Twilight's Sapphire chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
Terrific chapter. I find it interesting to learn this side of firefighting, instead of seeing what I can on TV through movies or just from the news on actual fires and I am looking forward to learning more.

Talk to you soon, take care and thanks!
Twilight's Sapphire chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
The beginning of a wonderful story, and considering what your hubby does for a living, a terrific subject from which to write!

Looking forward to seeing what happens, and also, that poem was beautiful and certainly fitting a firemans job.

Thanks and take care! Read you on Twitter! :)
KristALchelle chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
Loving this story, Girl! I can't wait to read about his first day and meeting the rest of the 'team'. No idea if that is the right word but I am looking so very forward to learning more terminology and behind the scene info. Thanks for an awesome beginning to what looks to be and exciting and informative story! ~KC
larin20 chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
Good first chapter! I like that your going into this pretty much an expert and I know that I'm going to be learning a lot about firefighting and all the areas inbetween. Yay! Can't wait for more!
larin20 chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Prologue for sure got my attention and that poem or verse was moving. On to chapter 1! I'm so excited for Firemanward !
Just Waiting chapter 2 . 10/23/2009
So...Where was Bella going? Or coming from?

And what is poor Edward trying to recover from?

Hm...Guess I'll just have to wait and find out...}:-)

Oh,by the way that Edward was checking out Bella I can tell

I'm gonna LOVE this story..};-)...Can't wait for an

Just Waiting chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
I was a little hesitant to continue on further with this

story...Not because it wasn't good...Quiet the contrary in

fact...I thought it would be a refreshing change of pace from

the normal fics I've come across and read...However the

heaviness of the Prologue and it's depth of emotion had me in

tears...I have several family members that have dedicated

their lives to this profession and it hit a little to close to

home...My Uncle Bill,Aunt Janice and their two children Winnie

and Matthew all work at the same firestation where my Uncle is

Fire Chief...

Several months ago they were called to a was 2:18

in the household consisted of a man,his wife and

their 13 month old baby they arrived to the house

noone had managed to make a way out sides of the

house were engulfed with all three fire trucks made

their way two of the trucks fought the blazes

outside one soaked a broken window as three firemen entered to

try and find the home four agonizing minutes

later two firemen emerged from the window with the man and his

third fireman had yet to firemen lead the

couple to the Medics all the while they were screaming,begging

the men to find their precious only allowed one

fireman to reenter the the man reappeared in sight

of the other firemen he was dragging my Uncle Bill who was

trying to grab ahold of anything he could for leverage to keep

from exiting the was useless and after being pulled

from the window the other men were restraining him to keep him

from situation had become to dangerous for them

to be inside any they could do was stand along side

their brothers and contain the raging infero as best they

less than two minutes after Bill had been dragged

from the house everything began to in that

instance the lives of those brave firemen would never be the

they stood there flooding the house with water,which

seemed to be doing no good,piercing screams began to penetrate

through the smoke filled firemen were useless in their

attempts to try and make a pathway with their shooting water

to where the sounds were coming was nothing more to do

but bear the agony of the screams until they eventually died

down and were no more.

After the fire had been reduced to nothing more than smoking

hot ash Uncle Bill walked the remains of the

.All to soon everyone there was brought to a

Bill stood motionless to the right side of the

rubble reaching him the men soon found the

reason for his pained stood there craddled in his

arms the charred body of the small angel he had tried so hard

to had been within three feet of the child

hasn't been the same of us have..

He continues to fight fires but now with such a fierceness

that he never had in the name of Baby

only human being to date he's ever lost in his more than 20

years as a quiet often visits where the house once

stood as well as the parents of little so to

remember just how important his job is than anything

cousin Matthew who is 20 and Bill's only son,who was also

there that day,has sworn to name his first born son after baby


If you go to the Johns Creek Fire Department where my Uncle

Bill is still Fire Chief and walk into his office you'll see

hanging on his wall a picture of a smiling 1 year old Zachary

.Under the picture is a plaque that simply says "Angels Are

The Reason".Hanging above is a golden fireman's hat with thick

black script and - Zachary Noel - across the front.

I can tell this story with such detail because I too was there

that and I had decided to have girl time and a

weekend of girly movies and we were in the middle of The

Notebook when the call came and I drove her were

hoping that by me taking her we could take less time to get

back home when she was things didn't go as

far it was the worst night of my life and the

memory of that night is something that as long as I live I'll

never forget.

So with your Prologue being from a firemans' POV and being

trapped with that poor little boy I was caught off

was like a slap in the face and a rushing flood gate of bad

I realized that your entire story will probably

not be so heavy laiden and emotional and so I decided to

continue on and the thought of Edward in a fire

suit sliding down a pole.;-)...

Just one small the chapters that read as the

prologue does would it be possible to add a warning at the

beginning of the would better prepare the reader

to be cautious or abandoned the chapter all that

being said I can say I'm excited about your story and will be

anxiously awaiting an update..:-)..Sorry if I rambled..It's a

habit that comes when I'm excited...JW
Kerry Hale chapter 2 . 10/23/2009
Love me some Fireward. So excited to read this story. Can't wait to read more.
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