Reviews for Harry's decision
Linna R chapter 28 . 3/21
Since I've read this I've been madly digging trough FF archive looking for a similiar-themed story. No luck so far. I'm crazy about the idea that Potters didn't actually want to leave Harry- it makes much more sense and is more canon than the usual. I simply LOVE this fic!
I know it's not very likely to happen now, since you haven't updated in a long time, but if you see this review please note that there are still people who would like to continue reading this and are expecting this chapter. :)
Btw- sorry for grammar/spelling mistakes; I'm not a native speaker.
cinthya chapter 28 . 12/13/2016
weird, harry had enemies much quickly than the first time, i mean snape now really hates him, and he was really checky and all but he dooesnt hate dan, and he is the spawn of potter, the real spawn of potter, he grew with them and all, um... well maybe harry looks, more like potter, and he likes the gryffindor and now is gryffindor but it is still weird.
Himanshu.99 chapter 28 . 12/7/2016
Can we see an update in future or has it been abandoned?
Himanshu.99 chapter 12 . 12/5/2016
Selfish Rosie, selfish Harry.
Anna chapter 28 . 10/23/2016
Amazing story! Wish there was more!
mckertis chapter 25 . 9/26/2016
Why do people insist on making Harry such a pussy all the bloody time ? He's got legitimate reasons ! Let him slap his stupid sister ! Punch his scummy brother ! Get the fuck ANGRY !
Saissa chapter 16 . 8/27/2016
Finally Lily goes dark - or at least that is what Dumbles will claim. LOL

She should cursed The 2 fat walruses and the fath aunt with the fat dogs as well.
Saissa chapter 15 . 8/27/2016
Damn it Harry - you should be yelling at Rosie that her parents THREW Harry away like an unwanted toy - no wonder he wants out of their world.

Why ANY mother would throw her child away, on the stupid advice of a senile and very manipulative old man, I will never know. But it proves to me that Lily is as dumb as the Ginger headed Moron from the Weasley family. Because she blindly obeys and does NOT STOP to think!
Saissa chapter 12 . 8/27/2016
Something tells that that bloody rat is actually the disgusting traitor we know as wormtail
Saissa chapter 6 . 8/27/2016
So now we know why they deliberately and with malice aforethought - THREW their son away!
Just like he was an unwanted toy!
Pat chapter 28 . 7/30/2016
This story was last updated nearly 2 years ago, but I hope you haven't given up on it. I'll bookmark it, and check it again someday.

The main themes you'll need to cover:
We can see Dan has a terrible thirst to prove himself, and a terrible jealousy of Harry. But will he go dark? And if so, what will he do to Harry, and what will the fallout from his actions be? If he doesn't go dark, how will his personality evolve?
You've suggested in multiple ways that Harry is exceedingly powerful; and that he has a foreign magic attached to him; and now he can read his twin Dan's mind without trying. So all these things will have to be explained.
How will the Potter family dynamics play out - will James continue to be an ass, will Dan feel Rose is taking sides, will she be forced to take sides or will she try to bring them together, will Dan continue to feel isolated from his family?
And on the side, what IS Sirius' secret business; how will the friendship dynamics play out with Neville Ron and Hermione; what about Narcissa and Umbridge and the Malfoy family and Rabastan and the Dark Lord and Harry's old school friends? (Will Dudley ever show up again? - seems like not.)

Also - why has nobody suggested meditation to Harry? Magic depends on focused intent - Harry, and for that matter Dan too, would benefit from it.
Lilyzinha chapter 28 . 6/5/2016
Where is the slytherin union huh? This was extremely sad, like so much bullying, and Dan must love what he got in slytherin but at the same time, must think of how easy it would be at any other house! So happy Malfoy is his best friend and i hope you didn't give up on this story
Lilyzinha chapter 22 . 6/5/2016
Would you please make Harry a profissional Quidditch player? That would be awesome!
And why does Harry need to go to Hogwarts to learn magic? Why can't they search for tutors? it seems like they are still pushing Harry towards the magic world and i agree with Harry the way they treat him is like he's gonna explode
Lilyzinha chapter 18 . 6/5/2016
Is Dan being bullied in the slytherin house? Also does he dislike or hate harry?
Lilyzinha chapter 17 . 6/5/2016
Also is someone going to teach magic to Harry? He really need to know
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