Reviews for The Kindness of Strangers
Nalu14126 chapter 5 . 11/28/2015
The story plot was good, and I enjoyed reading it. However it was riddled with spelling and grammatical errors. For example, when is this chapter you wrote; 'Half hours later on the Andromeda.', you should have said, 'Half an hour later on the Andromeda.'. You are also lacking commas in proper locations, in order to make the sentence flow smoothly. I also noticed on several occasions you would use a word similar to the one needed, but not quite. 'And the night light up and the sky rained fire.' This is a prime example of improper word usage and the lack of a comma. 'The night lit up, and the sky rained fire.'. All this being said it was a good story, also I hope you know i'm not trying to be mean. Just some constructive criticism. Lol, when I finished writing this I realized when this was written, and that you'll probably never see it. XD
Shakia chapter 5 . 10/11/2004
Awsome story! Agian I really loved it!
Mary Rose chapter 5 . 1/29/2002
It was a very good story. I liked it a lot.
Wedgewood chapter 5 . 1/28/2002
Wow! THat was a great story. Wonderful plot, great characterization. Good format too, it made it easy and fun to read. I love ALL yoour storys so much. Thanks


P.S. I'm so sorry I forgat to thank you at the end of chapter six in As Bad As It gets. I meant to say something, but all that showed up was your name and your stars. A million sorrys. I'll thank you extra next chapter if you stick with me.
sandi chapter 3 . 1/21/2002
I like stories that have both harper and beka in it. You are doing a great job, so far. So keep it coming. I hope you write another chapter real

verbannen chapter 3 . 1/19/2002
More... I really love Harper in this, and I like his interaction with Beka. I can't wait for the next chapter.
parisindy chapter 3 . 1/17/2002
Thanks you guys! this is a little lighter then what i usualy write so i'm glad you guys think it's ok...more coming soon!
iverson chapter 3 . 1/17/2002
this is really good, please keep it up.
Wedgewood chapter 3 . 1/17/2002
Like I said, I'm hooked.

It just gets better and better

Your so desriptive, I love your writing style.

Please write MORE MORE MORE!

verbannen chapter 1 . 1/14/2002
You must finish! This is good.
Ghost chapter 1 . 1/14/2002
I soo love this. Both tense and funny in parts. That's a hard tone to get, but you managed it nicely.

"Beka stood about 10 meters away Harper met her eyes and swallowed again he knew that look he closed his eyes and started to do what he did best."

This may be my favorite fic line of the week :)
Becky chapter 1 . 1/14/2002
Oh, cool story so far. Can't wait for more! :)
parisindy chapter 1 . 1/14/2002
thank you showing interest I will have more up today or tomorrow
Antares chapter 1 . 1/14/2002
More PLEASE Its really good so far. I can't wait to see what happens, you have one hooked reader here!

Me chapter 1 . 1/13/2002
ACK! Finish!