Reviews for Your True Colors
grandmachix chapter 24 . 3/25
Ok. That's just mean. You promised one more chapter and an epilogue. THAT WAS THREE YEARS AGO! I love your stories and you are an exceptional writer. But I really HATE abandoned stories! I am still following Little Green, too. Get with it, girl. Finish the story! Judy
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bonadea777 chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Just finished reading this story for the second time and enjoyed it as you will finish it someday.
debslmac chapter 24 . 10/24/2015
:) loving this story
Cynfulme chapter 12 . 6/9/2015
Tito, I need a tissue...
Cynfulme chapter 5 . 6/9/2015
Dear Lord, you sure know how to hook a reader, don't you? I really thought this was gonna be some weird shit
(Not that I haven't enjoyed reading weird shit before, but...), then I decided to read a bit more and well, you hooked me! You are one talented writer.
smellofpaw chapter 24 . 3/15/2014
Little Green led me to Kiddo...how lovely and wonderful! I cannot wait to read what you have in mind for the ending! xxx
Fleur50 chapter 24 . 1/1/2014
J'ai relu votre histoire... C'est aussi bon que la première fois. J'avais juste oublié le titre...et l'histoire! Heureusement que je l'ai retrouvé! C'était une recommandation dans une histoire...impact, je crois, pas sûr. Du titre.

J'espère que vous y mettrai la fin, c'est bien bon. Le seul problème avec votre histoire, c'est la distance de publication entre chaque chapitre, on a le temps d'oublier l'histoire, LOL.

Bonne chance pour la suite!

Google Translate. French.
Montréal, Québec
Fleur50 chapter 23 . 1/1/2014
Wow
Guest chapter 24 . 12/14/2013
Oh my god! Please finish the story it is fantastic! B
maphie chapter 24 . 12/10/2013
This is a strange take of Twific for sure. I like it but it's because you're very good at keeping things interesting by pulling familiar references and of course, writing a good story.
maphie chapter 15 . 12/10/2013
This is quite a unique take on Twific. Very clever.
Renee Aubin chapter 24 . 10/26/2013
Wow, Betti, what a treat to see you picking up YTC again! Can't remember whether I heard about your new chapter on Fictionators Friday or on Rob Attack - either way, welcome back. Of course I had to read it all the way through again, and reacquaint myself with Kiddo, Annie, Alice, and Law. It’s amazing how seamlessly you were able to pick it up again.

How fun that Kiddo can see through Annie’s bluster and fear about her birthday performance.

Nice variation on “Jazz”’s ability to calm Annie down backstage. Well, until she finds out Lucy will be playing with the band anyway. A funny image, cocktail with the paper umbrella in one hand, her walker in the other.

How sweet that Beatrice and Law have connected. "An impeccably tailored suit is for women what lingerie is for men, right?" Yup. Lovely that the former biker is such a gentleman.

Interesting: ‘I felt guilty about having taken away such a joyful and important rite as dating from my awfully young boyfriend. As far as I knew, he'd never even dated a girl before we met.’ I wonder if Annie will decide to make it up to him?

Wonderful:
‘"She's got stage fright really bad, and she was too chicken-shit for a joint, so it was either a smoke or quick sex in the broom closet," Alice rattled down happily, answering in my place. …
Kiddo cocked an eyebrow at me. "Quick sex helps with stage fright?"…
"And you chose the smoke?" Kiddo asked incredulously.’

Well really, why wouldn’t he be a little offended?

I love the interaction between Alice and Jason:
"Jesus fucking Christ, Eric, knock it off! I told you I'm not kissing that shit you slather on your mouth when you're in drag!”
Then ‘Wow, did the guy really just call Alice by her baptismal name without getting nut punched?’ It must be love.
Guest chapter 24 . 10/26/2013
You are a gifted writer. I look forward to your updates but only recently found your work. I truly enjoyed all of your stories.
lemonangeljuice chapter 24 . 9/26/2013
Went back and reread from the beginning. Just as good the second time around. Just like visiting old friends. Thank you!
SaraSaraT chapter 24 . 9/26/2013
I am so pleased that you have returned to this story. I love the different spin you have on Bella/Edward characters. And your Edward is gorgeous. I so want to start travelling by train just to find my own Edward. Thank you for finishing this wonderful story xx
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