Reviews for Stolen Innocence
Spookysammy chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
This is another story of yours that I loved. You described their sister perfectly, courageous yet delicate.
Carver Edlund chapter 8 . 5/14/2010
i really like this story so far! cant wait to see what happens next, update soon please :)
MelodicMisery chapter 8 . 2/23/2010
aw. :( this episode is always so sad, but it's like 10x sadder with jayne in there. i loved the update! more soon. :)
pickupthatamulet chapter 8 . 2/23/2010
Loved it :) I was happy to see ur update, i really like this story and i think you're doing an awesome job at it I love the relation Dean/Jayne, i feel like he can open more to her amd it nice. I cant wait to read more about this story and dont worry even if the last part of that chapter was more in a hurry than the first part, you did an amazing job and it was great.
samgirl19 chapter 8 . 2/23/2010
wow this chp was really sad poor jayne revisiting the house her mother died in and this chp made me a bit teary and this chp had a lot of emotions that we didnt get to see on the show so i like how u gave it some justice and i got to say i really liked this chp
Supernatural-Stalker chapter 7 . 1/16/2010
Yay, Jayne's back with her brothers! Nice little add-in with John...

I do think that Green Eyes could use some more detail, but overall, I still can enjoy it as-is.
MelodicMisery chapter 7 . 1/15/2010
i think green eyes is fine the way it is, however it's your story and if you feel that it needs some re-vamping to it, than go for it. i'd read it over again. ;) would you be putting it into a whole new story or just adding on to what you have? let me know if you wind up doing that. :) anywho, great update! she's back with her brothers, yay! lol. i loved the part with john. he's a good father, but he's stubborn. still, gotta love him. ;) and i really love dean and jayne's relationship. i mean it's like they're really close, but dean doesn't like to show it because that's just the way he is. and yet sam is the complete opposite, so i guess i love their relationship, too, lol. _ and the protectiveness over her is awesome. ;) overall you write the relationships in this story extremely well. one of the best i've seen! haha. _ loved the update! more soon. :)
pickupthatamulet chapter 7 . 1/15/2010
LOVED IT :) I cant wait to read more about this story, cauz honnestly it's a really good story About your re-writing of Green eyes i would be very happy to re-read it LOl it was an amazing story and it's being a while since i read it so :) Keep doing ur awesome job !
samgirl19 chapter 7 . 1/14/2010
so dean kept his promise and john showed up but he couldnt stay well that typical of him
pickupthatamulet chapter 6 . 1/14/2010
Awesome :) I really really love this story ! and i really like how Dean and Jayne are acting with eachother. they looks so similar i dont know i really like their brother/sister relationship and i have to said i really liked what Sam did to Dean for saying what he said to Jayne LOL I cant wait to read more about this, keep doing ur awesome job
samgirl19 chapter 6 . 1/13/2010
aw poor jayne it broke my heart what dean told her he shouldnt have said that to her even if he was angry or not and she only want to go with them because she is afraid of being alone and forgotten
MelodicMisery chapter 5 . 1/12/2010
aww. :( at least she'll be with bobby...but she still belongs with her brothers. loved the update! more soon.
pickupthatamulet chapter 5 . 1/12/2010
LOVED IT ! OMG i really love Jayne/Dean relationship and i also love Sam :) Ur doing an awesome job at this story and i cant wait to read more about it keep doing ur amazing job :)
HollyKalina23 chapter 5 . 1/12/2010
It's so sad that Jayne lost her friend but it's nice that Dean cares so much. Keep going.
samgirl19 chapter 5 . 1/12/2010
aw poor jayne her brothers want to leave her behind and jayne doesnt want to she wants to go with her brothers to hunt down the demon that killed her best friend
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