Reviews for The Thirteenth Rose
sizzyherondale chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
i loved that! so sweet
IridescentLight chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
aw 3.3
ruthnickcj chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Wow that was great! I wonder what they fought about?
Pleck chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
aww! that was a beautiful interpretation of such a cliche idea!
xBlownxAwayx chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Aww. So cute. I loved it.
myosh chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
so sweet and romantic..i loved the idea of the 13th rose
Sea of Topaz chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
It's short but it's cutely romantic. I admire your ability to put what could have been such a long tale into only one chapter. It is something I have never been able to accomplish. I remember once when my English teacher asked for a short story, maybe three pages at best. At the deadline day I handed him thirty two pages of manuscript and more of planning and drafts. You have gift, being able to condense what can be condensed and you seem to have learned to use it well. Kudos for somethig many people are uncapable of.

Your attention to detail is well kept. You don't over load the reader with drabble of repetition but you give a clear visiual. Again my congratulations for such a talent.

The mood you set is yet another component well done. Towards the beginning it seems a little lax but once you get to the romance it is amazing. You capture the comfort she finds in Jace well. And for the third time, good job.

Best of luck,

Sea
nisha chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
if this is a oneshot i will certainly cry. come on continue the story...for the sake of my sanity. come on.
BellaBaby2813 chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
If being seductive is illegal, Jace should have been sent to prison a LONG time ago! Loved it deeply!
PreciousJuls chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
This was very,very sweet.
everetza chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
This is a nice story, I like the flow of it, a good, action-based style that's best for a one shot. I hope you decide to write the event leading to it, I'd like to read it! One thing I would say is that, while most of the characterisation is excellent, well done (I like that Jace was hiding to see her reaction, ever the Shadowhunter; stealth and all that) I'm not sure Clary would apologize- maybe say something like she dosen't ever want him to leave etc, but seeing as she didn't know what the flower was and he's done something really bad saying sorry seems a bit off. That could be just me though, and overall this was great, so keep writing, and thanks a load for this fic! :)
UltraViolet21 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
so so so cute and sweet made my eyes water not lying scout's honour
Roxy Yagami chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
jace and zero should be bffs... both their voices are deep and seductive! but dude please, no more stories that make me cry! soo fabalus... .
XxX Fred Weasley's Wife XxX chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
aw :)
aquamysticwriter chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
That was incredibly sweet and romantic. *sigh* I wish jace would do that for me lol
20 | Page 1 2 Next »