Great story!

Loved this story. Read others with the similar premise of twin Potters and other then the one called Invisible, this the best. Adding to my favorites and plan on reading the sequel. Well done!

Why would Zack call Voldy "The Dark Lord" only Voldy's followers does that.

i like

OMG plot twist love it

HOLY CRAP... I LOVED THIS STORY

At first I thought that by being so different from the canon I wouldn't really like this, but I was curious, so I started reading.

One nice thing of fanfiction is being able to HATE a character (or, well, various, as it's here) in one story while being able to love it in another. It all depends on how they're written, on how they act.

I really liked your Harry/Rial characterization. I'm really looking forward to reading the sequel! (you'll probably hear more from me there).

Thank you for sharing!

I loved it. So ingenious.

You quoted the Hobbit! I love you!

have you read the inheritance cycle, as your explanation of old celtic sounds very similar to elvish in that. also, i think it is called gaelic

loved it

i love this story...it was awesome...i am off to the sequel...

So... does the tattoo mean Rial is a fairer contender for the prophecy child? I mean the dark idiot did mark him and all... XD

I laughed, I cried, I bloody want to kill someone! That was amazing!

Mmm. Seems to be giving away to much information for a Slytherin. But I understand the need to set the stage for there relationship. Hopefully the rush of development will smooth out. I do like your idea for this. Especially the starting school late.