Reviews for Midnight Sun
NekoDae chapter 1 . 9/6
I'm on Mobil so I can't see if its already been asked but... Why's he using Locomotor Mortis to move his trunk? That's a Leg Locking Curse, and is probably not the most useful item-moving spell...
Guest chapter 26 . 9/3
yeah i cant stomach your rial anymore he is to weak to survive in the snake pit. You are changing the story to fit a weak character instead of keeping the brutality of the snakes and making a character that thrives in such a environment. he should be able to after all by his idol threats and child hood. instead, he is constantly pushed around by something worse then his "father" and brother, he is being shoved into a pit by the author when his type does not fit the into the pit. Thanx for writing and maybe u have other stories that are excellent and are just not ment to write about a sly brutal snake. for u have turned the sly brute to a quivering hatchling.
Guest chapter 25 . 9/3
why does rial take such abuse, slapped and punched by his "father" and brother only to retort with idol threats. Then he is once again beat up. Smart he is but emotionally and physically weak as a toddler. I had hoped this would continue and rial would FOLLOW through with his threats, few chapters left so i doubt it. The character rial that you created is very smart but that is over shadowed by how emotionally and physically weak he is.
Dayday chapter 5 . 9/1
Harry was 14 in the tournament not 15
Guest chapter 27 . 8/28
This was a very beautiful fanfic. The writing is beautiful, yet simple and understandable. I love Rial; he is such a sweet little but an occasionally angry kitten. I absolutely love Sirius, OH, and Severus! I love that man! And Lucius was so precious! And the Slytherins are amazing. I fucking love James and Lily bashing! They both deserve hell! I certainly didn't expect the Gryffindor Golden Boy/Girl to be such a motherfucker asshole. But I loved bashing him too. Thank Remus for preventing Rial from jumping off, that man is a godsend. Oh, who else..? OH, MeowGonagall is hilarious, Dumbledore is a meh guy. Though I hate his fucking favoritism. I feel so bad for Slytherins, especially Severus, but I still love him. Going to read the sequel this minute. And u might be interested to know that I finished this fanfic in 3 hours.
Precious chapter 28 . 8/19
That was really nice. You have a creative mind
Lunar-Hedgehog chapter 28 . 8/15
Thank God. I read this story a long time ago and I have been trying to find it for 7 years bc I favorited on my other account but I found it! And I read it all in one night... Still one of my favorite stories ever I am happy to say
RandomThingz123 chapter 16 . 8/14
I'm not gonna say that I am glad yet, because things are just getting started!
RandomThingz123 chapter 13 . 8/14
I cried once again.
RandomThingz123 chapter 12 . 8/14
Something is about to go down...
RandomThingz123 chapter 9 . 8/14
I think that his secret is that he likes his gender. And please for the love of god and all that is holy, please let Harry fight back! It's getting to me really bad about how he isn't hitting them back!
RandomThingz123 chapter 5 . 8/14
I actually cried when James hit him. I don't know why I do that, I cry at sad parts in movies and books, it sucks. That's one thing I hate about myself. I cried for Harry, well Rial. In the end, I am happy that he is becoming a stronger person. Hopefully, he can make sure no one hits him like that again...
Kimmytrainer chapter 25 . 8/7
For once Bagman does something good. I like this version of Harry. If it weren't for his looks I'd totally forget that Rial was originally Harry Potter. The Potters are total bastards in this story; I'm so glad Rial is a Black, for his sake. It's really interesting that Slytherins are the protagonists and Gryffindors are the antagonists this time around.
Kimmytrainer chapter 24 . 8/7
I knew I recognized that riddle. I got the answer after reading the second line, and that was obviously suspicious since I'm not the best at riddles lol
Kimmytrainer chapter 14 . 8/6
Ooooh I like this turn of events!
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