|Reviews for Midnight Sun|
| vampdreams chapter 28 . 12/13/2019
This was brilliant!
Loved it beginning to end
You have done a wonderful job of the characters, pace and plot
Would also love to punch James in the face
Can't wait to read the next installment
| Jjj chapter 14 . 12/9/2019
I can picturing that you are here in front of me and saying,"Ha! Everything happen for reason. It's trully justified how james hate harry."
But still, it's sad. And nothing James did wich is good or light...
And, harry as black heir always my fav...
| Jjj chapter 8 . 12/9/2019
I want to know about imperius class with moody. But,..
And.. May I know how harry will got his school expense when he already disowned?
I know hogwarts have fund for orphan,.. But disowned is not orphaned. And about Malfoy child... Just because school house you abandoning a child? Wow.. Your fic world really a cruel world... And they still care about good and bad?
I don't think so.
| Jjj chapter 6 . 12/9/2019
Dumbledore bashing & wbwl theme is my guilty pleasure. But like knowing that tomato is fruit, but not include it in fruit salad, I'll tell you how stupid this story is. Wich bad, and wich is good, wich is dark, and wich one is the light?
You don't teach a child how to read, and the child is stupid. You don't teach a child anything and surpress his magic and you call him stupid... It's not james that stupid. It's the author who write it under ignorance and be done with it. Still I read it. And give all the plot holes additional information for myself. Like I pretend that James not surpress a magic from a child he called squib, or dumbledore is loving a cruel familly and make them "the savior". Just abuse and neglect is enough, why surpress a magic to a called squib? Or,. James know that it wrong boy who lived, but it too late to change, and he affraid to lost the money & the fame. But,.. If it's the case, why he disowned harry? If you sane enought you'll like previously, make the real on tight leash. Hidding him, surpress him,.. Stupid fanfic...
| Jjj chapter 4 . 12/9/2019
It takes most witches and wizards three hours to brew the potion you did this afternoon...
When you cooking something, it's take sometime to make the ingredient cooked. When you take less time, the ingredient less cooked. What about potion?
If you can make it slow, you can make it fast?
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/3/2019
Snape and Black, Lucius and Lupin, and Blaise and Zera?
| Zurver chapter 9 . 11/15/2019
Ugh you don’t have to call Zachary by his full name all the time. It makes the expressing the anger ineffective since his full name is so mouthy.
| Zurver chapter 3 . 11/15/2019
Lmao this is so outrageous and exaggerating. No one would actually disown their child just because they being sorted to a school’s house that isn’t to their liking. It’s not that important anyway, just labels.
| DS2010 chapter 28 . 10/30/2019
Amazing story I am so glad I found it.
Thank you for portraying Harry aka Rial Black as I would have liked to see him.
| DS2010 chapter 26 . 10/30/2019
I love Minerva's nick name
| DS2010 chapter 25 . 10/30/2019
Damn right that prat is a coward.
Glad to see Rial survived the dark lord.
| DS2010 chapter 23 . 10/30/2019
Laughing, just laughing at Rial getting back at that prat. Making the golden boy and girl was masterful work. And the thing with the statue was the best.
| DS2010 chapter 22 . 10/30/2019
I liked Rial's sense of honor something that prat Zachy doesn't have.
| DS2010 chapter 19 . 10/30/2019
I like Rials insights to the members of the Malfory, LeStrange and Snape clans.
I agree with your note at the end too Dumbledore and James beware of what you created.
| DS2010 chapter 18 . 10/30/2019
I like Zera she has spunk