|Reviews for The Other Self|
| sam7sung chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
sorry but whole forgiveness drama is shit. you never forgive kidnapper of your kids! wtf
| sam7sung chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
stupid cunt Aka XD
| sam7sung chapter 6 . 7/2/2017
you promised angst, what was this?
| Kusama Saya chapter 22 . 4/19/2017
To this day, this whole entire fanfic series is still my favorite. I always recommend it to my fellow readers who love Blood like I do and I can never get over the amount of work that went into it. Honestly the best and a great story overall
| Lullabyes chapter 22 . 1/29/2016
...i.e. Lullabyes who has long forgotten her password to this site.
A couple of days ago I got a weird itch to read your Samurai Champloo fic while on the subway, which is when I noticed this particular fic had been updated. (Clearly the cosmos was telling me something huehuehue). So glad to see the epilogue, and a great overall layout of the Chiroptera dynasty and how it has spawned, as well as how it will continue to flourish. Nathan remains tricky and intrusively awesome as ever, and I can almost envision the NANA-style dramas that will unfold with the Otonashi and Goldsmith twins in a rock band.
Great chapter, and lovely overall fic. (Nyah! to all the haters) Happy trails, and maybe someday there will be more stuff from you! I will keep my fingers crossed! XOXO
| Nintendoman01 chapter 22 . 1/4/2016
It may have taken a while... but it was worth the wait.
I'm almost sorry it's over.
| Lily chapter 21 . 3/23/2014
I hope you end up writing the epilogue someday. I saw that there were some long-winded and grammatically terrible negative reviews for this story (and honestly I'm quite sure the two that were written in May were by the same person) but please don't get discouraged. Fanfiction exists as a form of wish-fulfillment anyway and it seems very odd that people would criticize a fic for being OOC when it's obviously an AU anyway :P I also find it odd when people complain about ships in fanfiction when it's quite clear which direction the story will be going.
Personally I enjoyed the story though Diva's personality came across as a bit grating.
| andrea chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
I'm sorry to say, but this story struck me as extremely heavyhanded. too ooc, too much awkward grammar and a very forced and contrived plot. solomon and diva's relationship is sickening because it feels shoved in the readers face. your version of her is also ridiculous and one dimensional. I know fanfic is wish fulfillment and that you can write what you want. but please have more respect for the characters and your readers.
| Anna chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Whoa, I really dislike this story as well ass SolomonXDiva in your writing. I'm not a fan of your previous fics, but this on'es is a mess. Firsst off, thanl you four bringing Diva back and make somomon somowhavvt over...her...
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
I have no words for this chapter. How can you even argue that Diva wasn't the cause of Riku's death? even is she didn't rape, her attack was what caused Saya into turning him into a chevalier anyway. She)Diva) a, oviously chose him because the envied Saya, B. took advantage of his insntincts to mate with her. how can you argue it wasn't rape?
Lady, watch, the anime, read the novels, the boy was terrified when he met Diva, yet forced to mate with her, due to his instincts- Of course Saya hates Diva after the murder of her beloved little brother, of course she wants revenge. I'm amazed how every character is like; Saya! You did so much shit too! nevermind to you foiled Anbshel and Diva's plan to destroy mankind by turning everyne into chiropterans! Saya. you're such a bitch for not forgiveng/ wanting to associate with your little brothers' murderer!
And sorry to burst your bubble, but even the selfserving asshole Solomon decided to dedicate his life to Saya rather than Diva, even though he knew Saya would never return he's feelings, a suprisingly selfless act for such a a selfish character, ultimately proving his love for Saya.
| Lea chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
I really like your other stories, but this one strikes me as nothing but an attempt to clean up romatic loose ends. Why solomonxDiva? Seriously, why? Unlike solomon, Karl and James really seemed to care for Diva, selfishly sacrificing their own happiness for hers. Solomon, on the other hand left her and betrayed her and even tried to kill Diva, because he he felt that his feelings for a girl he barely knew was more important than his duty to the queen who had given him immortality, freedom from the human world abnd favored him among the chevaliers. Obviously, his true feelling was for Saya, so strong that he trashes and attackts Diva without feeling any regret. Seriously, read novels, Solomon's only regret wasn't that he coulnd't fullfill Saya's wish-
could possibly kille You try to portray Diva as a strong woman, the only one who wouldn't get stuck under Solomons Shoe. but the fact that she forgives and pairs up with Solomon creeps the fuck out of me.
He BETRAyed and left Diva, for a woman he barely knew, he didn't even know whether she liked him or not. He threw a dagger at her simlpy to protect Saya and revealed Diva's whereabouts to the only who could possibly kill her. he dedicated hi's life to her even after knowing she would never return hi's feelings. WHY, why would he suddely chase after your bitchy and juvenile version of Diva?
| Esther Clemmens chapter 21 . 12/1/2012
Hehe! We're both evil. - I love it!
| Esther Clemmens chapter 17 . 11/30/2012
YEESSSS! That goes to show you- there's nothing more dangerous than a Momma protecting her babies. Way to go Saya! I'm glad Everyone but Karl is okay.
| Esther Clemmens chapter 16 . 11/30/2012
Oh God! So scarey and I'm confused? What's wrong with Saya?
| Esther Clemmens chapter 15 . 11/30/2012
NOOOOO! Not the twins! PLEASE, tell me you didn't bring them into this!