Reviews for Standing Where She Stood
planet p chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
The first sentence does not quite make sense, but the rest is okay, except maybe where you have written: As I look back at the bar I think to myself. I can't believe... (You might use a colon - : - instead of a full stop). Apart from that, I guess one might think something like Jarod does here in a situation like this.