Reviews for A Den of Foxes
Matsukaze Tenma chapter 11 . 2/26
This is truly very interesting to read; please update this too
KyoudaiDoushi chapter 9 . 11/18/2014
Brrrr. I know what you mean. My sister had a boyfriend like that when we were teens. They were friends in school, but once they started dating he started isolating her from friends, family and any interests that weren't directly related to him. He was never abusive, luckily, otherwise Daddy would have given him a new hole to breath from. Imagine his shock when he joined the military and she refused to move to the other side of the country with him like a good little puppy.
KyoudaiDoushi chapter 6 . 11/18/2014
Other then the fact that you have the tendency to repeat background information chapter to chapter, I only really have on issue with why no one seems to question the whole "Ichigo is Minato and Kushina's oldest son" thing. According to you, Ichigo is around 20. Conventional guestimate says Minato and Kushina were 20 to 22 when they died. That would mean that, at best, they were 14 when he was supposedly born, if not younger.
zachary12 chapter 11 . 6/11/2014
nice work do more on this one like it
Guest chapter 11 . 3/6/2014
Wow I just read this story and lived every minute of it, keep it up!
WhiteFangDarkClaw chapter 11 . 12/6/2013
It's a good story.
SPark681 chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
Nice chapter I hope Rin and Ichigo do end up married and the two bastards Kakashi and that other bastard Sasuke get their 'rightful end' anyways keep up the great work!
ferduran chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
It is great to have you back, hope that you can update the next chap sooner. By the way how it goes your other ficc A Fragment of the Past?
Jay chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Your tendency to leave words out of sentences is jarring, and causes extremely irritating pauses to determine an appropriate word for those locations.
xxPercyRoxxx chapter 11 . 10/16/2013
Update soon
StrongGuy159 chapter 11 . 10/15/2013
Funny & cool chapter continue please.
Kithrin chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
ok, now this chapter makes sense, thanks.
Kithrin chapter 6 . 10/15/2013
no scene of Kushina actually RETURNING? or of graduation? Kushina was mentioned ONCE in the last chapter, it seems like there is a missing chapter here...
1066wthec chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Have you read BLeach or heard of it
The king of ducks chapter 6 . 6/21/2013
Umm...I think you skipped a chapter cause you don't explain the rest of naruto training or where kushina come from or the team placement or anything of the matter and it kind of confuses me a whole lot! Also it might be better if you turn down the ass hoe alittle on saskue I mean sure I hate him just as much as everyone else but you are kind of going over bored at leas that is what it feels like. But that is just my lazy opion and so far the fanfiction you are writing seems pretty good. keep up he good work.
127 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »