|Reviews for Change|
| Angelfish369 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Hmm...wondering if you thought any more about this story after the initial prologue. I'm certainly intrigued by where you planned to take this.
| SugarSpiral chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Wha... I haven't a clue what's going on... but I'm hooked already? HOW does that work?
Update please :)
| xReadItAndWeepx chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
You really know how to confuse people, I tell you.
I'm trying to figure out how this all fits together. First, who wrote the excerpt from the beginning of the chapter? Miyako? Someone else? Second, how does the part with Taichi watching the news about the disapperences fit into the last part with Miyako and Hikari in it? How big a gap is there between 2006 and present day?
This looks like it's going to be a really interesting story.
Please update as soon as you can.
| ARCtheElite chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
To be honest, I have little to say until more of the plot unravels, purely because of the fickle (this may be the first time I'm using this word right...hopefully) nature of the prologue. Of all the characters you presented so far, I have to say I liked Miyako's the most...
It seems like this can be a so-called "reflection of society". I wonder how accurate that is, though...
| Zyanya chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
It looks quite interesting...what happened to Yamato, T.K and Ken? Please go on...
| BenignUser chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
I have a million questions and you've offered so few answers!
I can't even seem to figure out who the narrator in the opening segment is. I think the possibility it's Hikari has been thrown out due to Hikari being miss popular in Miyako's introduction. I suppose I'm somewhat leaning towards it being Takeru, and assuming something big happened afterwords involving the disappearances.
I'm also inclined to say Taichi had something to do with the disappearance. He randomly takes to watching the news, presumably right when the other four vanish, and claims to be Yamato's only friend. Quite suspicious!
Another thing that tends to draw even more confusion is when "Present Day" actually is. Exactly how much time has passed between April, 2006 and "Present Day?" That could give a clue as to who the narrator in the opening really is.
I suppose I'll just wait like everyone else to see what else comes of this.
| emotionless-robot chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
I think it'll be interesting to see where this goes... you've got me hooked!
| guavawolf chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
ooh, sounds interesting already
i'll be watching for this :D
| ThatsWhatSheSaid07 chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Oh man you definitely caught my attention! I wanna know what happened to them! Please update asap!
| Cara Miro chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Okay, if your mission was to confuse the readers, you've sure succeeded with me. I'm curious as to why the boys escaped, why Taichi is such a moody little person, and why the story is called "Change". As of now, I'm on sembreak so I'm too lazy to use my brains. (LOL) Hopefully, I get some answers in the later chapters. ;)
| PrincessJaded chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Well it's safe to say that I'm confused! C;
So I demand a second chapter to give me some clarity because duh, here I am wondering what the heck is going on! Do you know that I've already made up five different reasons on why four very important people are missing! Three on why Tai's suddenly a moody bitch, and well Miyako always struck me as a little cowardly so she's off the hook! But you're not!
Erm, please! :D
xoxo to you, Chocolate lover! :P
| Aster Selene chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Oh noez, another "OH GOD PEOPLE ARE DIFFERENT LET'S BEAT THE ** OUT OF THEM" thingy.