Reviews for Drifting Away
CHIBI-CRAZY chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
I thought it was really nice. A kiss at the end might've been a nice touch, but that would've been pretty cliche, huh? Anyway, I really like that Rapunzel and Romeo thing was pretty funny, (typical Sora for ya). It added some nice humor.
Tea-PartyCrasher chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Love,love, love, LOVE! No other words I can say, except, I give Ashi a pet penguin!
DarkFlame Alchemist chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
aww that was a nice story good job
Gloxinia chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Good story, really good story, but I get the feeling you wrote this for Clous and Tifa at first because of a typo where Riku calls Ashi Tifa. You might want to fix that.
Jupiter-Lightning chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
This was a very cute and sweet oneshot. I haven't really been a big fan of oneshots with OCs and main characters getting together lately, but I find that this one is written quite well and the OC isn't really irritating and annoying at all. I found a few typing errors, but there's a big one you might want to go back and fix:

“I don’t get it. I left you, let you down and pushed you away…” Riku said, “How can you still feel this way for me? You should have given up on me a long time ago TIFA…”

Yeah, you put Tifa instead of Ashi. It made me smile, though. XD

Anyway, great job and thank very much for a good read! :)