Reviews for Lay Your World On Me
mrsvixter chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
great fict
would love this story to be expanded
a real edward thats a bit naughty and feral but also loving
well done
mamaruti chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
A very well written story. Nice one!
LithMuffin chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Erm wow. Just wow!
Amazing O/S I like this Edward :D
SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
That was hot!
cullen sandra chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Loved it. I wish u would continue this one. So much more to this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Hot! I liked how you made E more of a "traditional" vamp
Clayton15 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Update you freaking whore! u left such a bi cliffie

And this story is so amazing! Lol just kidding about

The whore part ;)
Sapho99 chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Well what a suprise what a great story. Do you plan to continue?

I think you should, could be a new take on the Cullens taking over the America's.

sapho99
Dulcinea21bella chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Wow. This was amazing. There was so much passion and so much need. I wish there was more of this. I fell completely under this story's hypnotic spell! Any chance of more? What happened when Aro found out?
twilight-saga-lover95 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
really good! One of the best one shots i've ever read! :)
kinsano chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Wow, I really liked this!
DJW Isabella Cullen chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This excellent I have really enjoyed this the writing is so well done and I love the interaction between Edward and Bella...
jdhsmomth chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Oh my gosh! That was awesome! Thanks for a great read!
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
this was awesome, seriosuly! loved strong posseiveward!great job!
TheLadyKT chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
great so far
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