Reviews for Shadows Without Substance
Mystical chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Hello, Crystal Rose of Pollux.

This was such a beautiful fanfic...I lament the fact that Pegasus is stuck in the Shadow Realm.
Hajiscello chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
you should continue. It's really good so far
Vaasth chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Wow! That was intense! I've never heard of this Reshef of Destruction game,

I'd forgotten all about Para and Dox until now. Since they only appeared in Duelist Kingdom we never really saw them again throughout the series.

I hope Yugi forgives Atem and Seto. And poor Pegasus!

This is great, I really like it! Keep up the good work! )
The Duelist's Heiress chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Poor Pegasus!

This is interesting, please keep going.

starwefter chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
HOLY -! I am in awe! This is wonderful, and, wow! do you know how to start a story with a bang, or what?

Seriously, I really, really liked this - I've added it to favorites already. This is going to be a great and wild ride if it continues as well as it has started.
Pfefferminztea chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Well, you certainly didnt depict Seto as OOC here. :D

"Ive got a life to return to", when somebody elses life is at stake?

And once again, I cannot help wondering wheter you remember every single one of the minor characters in YGO?

Im sure I could have watched the show more closely, but Para and Dox? I admire your memory!
LadyBastet92 chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
I've never played the game, so I don't understand all the details, but I LOVE THIS so far D Looking forward to more!
LuckyLadybug chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Finally! **has had so much going on this morning.**

The flashback scene is so intense and amazing. ;_; **loves what you did with it.** So heartbreaking, though! **hugs them.** And poor Yugi, going through so much mental turmoil because they couldn't save Pegasus along with the world... And Atem, thinking that Yugi will probably never forgive him and Seto...

I love that you gave Croquet a scene. X3 Another sadly underused character... (I wonder whatever happened to Kimo... He never seems to turn up after Duelist Kingdom.) And Paradox Brothers hurt/comfort! I was not expecting that. Poor guys. ;_; **But snarks Para continuing to rhyme.** And oh wow, intriguing, that Croquet is thinking Kaiba might need to take over Industrial Illusions...

And poor Pegasus! You depict his plight so vividly. I like how he's feeling remorse for what he did in the past. And such a frightening situation, to be right there with Reshef and trying to crawl away! So horrible, too, to think that he'll never see Cecelia again, not even death being a release...
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Good chapter. I hope they can help Poor Pegasus.