Reviews for A Whatever In Need
SuperPaige chapter 4 . 6/7/2010
...did you seriously write 'frig ya'? Really, sestra? Just use the actual word, c'mon, you know what it is! "FU,CK"

Anyways, I like it, as usual! Goodsies!
SuperPaige chapter 3 . 5/6/2010
Good job! I like it lots and lots!
SuperPaige chapter 2 . 4/8/2010
One chapter left to go! So far, so good. I really like, though you seem to be a big fan on fragments *tsk tsk* You made Bulma very emotional, and I HATE the way she jumped to conclusions like that! Not good for someone who's supposed to be a damned genius! Keep going, sestra, I can't read more!
SuperPaige chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Got the first chapter down! LOL, I liked it when Bulma called him the great Griffin Prince of three and one fourth alien primates! Very nice so far!
BunniGirl chapter 2 . 1/6/2010
So..what happens? I'm dying to know what Vegeta's going to do to win back his mate's trust!
Cap'n Hunk chapter 2 . 12/9/2009
It was good!
omnipotent Porunga chapter 2 . 12/9/2009
poor, poor Veggie...

amongst all the mess, i really feel sorry for the faithful, framed alien...
Cap'n Hunk chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
I didn't think there was anything wrong with that. It was great! Keep writing1
Viva La Amore chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
It is really good.I glad that our plot isn't the same. Very Enjoyable.
omnipotent Porunga chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
good beginning (as it is your very first fan-fic)...
Satu-D-2 chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
This is very interesting so far. I like how things have gone. The way you portrayed Bulma's reaction is very good. I can't wait to read more :D Good work
Blackpanther1985 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
i enjoy what i read i hope there is more to come.
Ron'sBella chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Arh! Awesome story! Update, update, update! I hope u keep writing this fic cos it looks great! I can't belive it's your first story... It's great! Update soon ok? :)
Unlisshed chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
I liked it. I don't have any critisms -I'm no good at those- but a awesome effort for your fist fic. I'm really looking foward to where you take this and who this mysterious bunch who want to tear apart the Breifs' family is!