...did you seriously write 'frig ya'? Really, sestra? Just use the actual word, c'mon, you know what it is! "FU,CK"

Anyways, I like it, as usual! Goodsies!

Good job! I like it lots and lots!

One chapter left to go! So far, so good. I really like, though you seem to be a big fan on fragments *tsk tsk* You made Bulma very emotional, and I HATE the way she jumped to conclusions like that! Not good for someone who's supposed to be a damned genius! Keep going, sestra, I can't read more!

Got the first chapter down! LOL, I liked it when Bulma called him the great Griffin Prince of three and one fourth alien primates! Very nice so far!

So..what happens? I'm dying to know what Vegeta's going to do to win back his mate's trust!

It was good!

poor, poor Veggie...

amongst all the mess, i really feel sorry for the faithful, framed alien...

I didn't think there was anything wrong with that. It was great! Keep writing1

It is really good.I glad that our plot isn't the same. Very Enjoyable.

good beginning (as it is your very first fan-fic)...

This is very interesting so far. I like how things have gone. The way you portrayed Bulma's reaction is very good. I can't wait to read more :D Good work

i enjoy what i read i hope there is more to come.

Arh! Awesome story! Update, update, update! I hope u keep writing this fic cos it looks great! I can't belive it's your first story... It's great! Update soon ok? :)

I liked it. I don't have any critisms -I'm no good at those- but a awesome effort for your fist fic. I'm really looking foward to where you take this and who this mysterious bunch who want to tear apart the Breifs' family is!