Reviews for A Whatever In Need |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ...did you seriously write 'frig ya'? Really, sestra? Just use the actual word, c'mon, you know what it is! "FU,CK" Anyways, I like it, as usual! Goodsies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! I like it lots and lots! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One chapter left to go! So far, so good. I really like, though you seem to be a big fan on fragments *tsk tsk* You made Bulma very emotional, and I HATE the way she jumped to conclusions like that! Not good for someone who's supposed to be a damned genius! Keep going, sestra, I can't read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Got the first chapter down! LOL, I liked it when Bulma called him the great Griffin Prince of three and one fourth alien primates! Very nice so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So..what happens? I'm dying to know what Vegeta's going to do to win back his mate's trust! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor, poor Veggie... amongst all the mess, i really feel sorry for the faithful, framed alien... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't think there was anything wrong with that. It was great! Keep writing1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is really good.I glad that our plot isn't the same. Very Enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good beginning (as it is your very first fan-fic)... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very interesting so far. I like how things have gone. The way you portrayed Bulma's reaction is very good. I can't wait to read more :D Good work |
![]() ![]() i enjoy what i read i hope there is more to come. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Arh! Awesome story! Update, update, update! I hope u keep writing this fic cos it looks great! I can't belive it's your first story... It's great! Update soon ok? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. I don't have any critisms -I'm no good at those- but a awesome effort for your fist fic. I'm really looking foward to where you take this and who this mysterious bunch who want to tear apart the Breifs' family is! |