|Reviews for The First Time Is Better|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15
I liked it
| TOOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Whats with the ribbon being tied up around his length all about? Huh?
| verygreenviolin chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
i loved it
| IWatch all Anime chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
awwww the ending was really cute
| yaoifangurl4life chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
*holds bleeding nose with left hand and whimpers* so hot...
| TheRedButlerFan chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
cute 333 - was a heart lol
| Kiko-chan X Kanda-sama chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
the ending is sweet~ i have no idea why i think that cos this is lemon and lemon isnt supposed to be sweet!
| AnimeCrazed121 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
*sigh* yaoi is so CUTE! and i honestly (well maybe not honestly) dont know why people get so embarrassed at reading it and im glad some people can write stories like these without embarrassment! *giggles* it was soo cute! even though i dont understand some of the words so just a suggestion but maybe you could put a translation part at the end of your story so people know what tthe words say but besides that i loved this story!
| Lai Jun Chen chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
kinky. short but good
| Kichou chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Naughty Allen and Kanda. Very nice.
| bloodiedangle chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
aw~ Allen you closet slut!
the smut was pretty good, but it all seemed a little rushed and at times was a bit confusing.
| silverneko chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
lol, this was pretty funny,and smut wasn't that bad,
hahaha, keep on writing!