Reviews for The First Time Is Better
alzubaidyreem chapter 1 . 2/10/2016
Oh lala nice good job
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
I liked it
TOOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Whats with the ribbon being tied up around his length all about? Huh?
verygreenviolin chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
i loved it
IWatch all Anime chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
awwww the ending was really cute
yaoifangurl4life chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
*holds bleeding nose with left hand and whimpers* so hot...
TheRedButlerFan chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
cute 333 - was a heart lol
Kiko-chan X Kanda-sama chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
the ending is sweet~ i have no idea why i think that cos this is lemon and lemon isnt supposed to be sweet!
AnimeCrazed121 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
*sigh* yaoi is so CUTE! and i honestly (well maybe not honestly) dont know why people get so embarrassed at reading it and im glad some people can write stories like these without embarrassment! *giggles* it was soo cute! even though i dont understand some of the words so just a suggestion but maybe you could put a translation part at the end of your story so people know what tthe words say but besides that i loved this story!
Lai Jun Chen chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
kinky. short but good
Kichou chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Naughty Allen and Kanda. Very nice.
tessameh chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
aw~ Allen you closet slut!

the smut was pretty good, but it all seemed a little rushed and at times was a bit confusing.

Good job.
silverneko chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
lol, this was pretty funny,and smut wasn't that bad,

hahaha, keep on writing!