Nice story I liked it.

Oh dear, well, the memories of dreams fade, mostly ...

As the saying goes, be careful what you wish for. Poor poor Tim

Oh no, Tim can't make a terrible choice like that - can he?

I have to wonder what Gibbs is like as a father-in-law

love the story hope you do more with it love Gibbs and Tim relationship

The diversity and range of your plots still amaze me. I can not think of many stories where wishing for anther reality was good.

so sad it got tears to my eyes :'(

OMG I already loved your stories, but this one brought tears to my eyes.. Right now I'll began to read Cape Fear and I hope that they both find solace in that one… Nice writing, again...

Nice Story.
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OMG! I just found and read this story this morning. I am so glad I keep tissues near my computer . . . If there was a was to "most-favorite-favorite" a story, this would be the one that I would do it to! I sit here in awe of your talent, thank you.

What a powerful story. I can't believe i never read this one before. Wonderful!

Waahhh! D: So sad! I loved it!

I don't know who I feel worse for, McGee because he did what he had to, or Gibbs because his "son-in-law" killed his daughter - again. Either way, great story.

that was almost creepy. but it was still good, i liked it, well done. :D