|Reviews for Surprise|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
This made my day. Nice job! :)
| Hiryu-san chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Trey're so cute! xP
Very pretty story, i liked reading it.
| zerOtodona chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Oh, this was just too good! (grins).
| xxdarknessxfallsxx chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Awh! I adore this pairing and you made this especially cute! Cute as in keeping me on my toes and making me fan by the end. Good lead! I enjoy the bomber's little rants as well, misleading the readers until at the end, you just kept making us guess, making us have to read faster than literacy allows.
| KunoichiHakira666 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
omg, lmao. (yes, such long words, i know.) this made me squee. you could just imagine him doing that. a defeated "surprise" with fangs in would sound so cute, especially with it being kimblee that says it. "this is not how the crimson alchemist is supposed to die..." made me laugh hard.
keep up the great work
| silver starlight serpant chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
The ending seems more fitting for April Fools Day.
| AngelCallie chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Ahahahaha, funny. I love the of Kimbley stalking Riza at HQ for his own amusement, it's hilarious. I never really thought I'd read a cute Kimbley fic, but this one has done it. The only problem I have with the fic is that Riza was a cadet during Ishbal, not a captain (captains actually outrank lieutenants :) )