Reviews for Forever Bound |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, so first, I’m confused. This is obviously not a true historical story. Too many things don’t add up so I am assuming you are taking poetic license here. How could a police officer be high society? In the first chapter you talk about Bella being from a high society family and then we find that Charlie was a police officer. I think when a story starts off like this it makes people critique your story even more. They start picking it apart. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG it was Charlie that saved Rose! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Applause to Bella! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! I figured that you wouldn't make Bella suffer so! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is shattering my heart! How could you do this, after all they've been through to be happy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hang him high! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter, seeing the light bulb go off in Edward's head! We must remember that he is only 19, just barely a man himself. How old is Tanya? She is a conniving beotch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Edward will come around and truly see this sweet girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice story. |
![]() ![]() I can't believe Bella even wants Edward around her. If it was not for him being a selfish prick that would not have happened to her. I hope Bella leaves Edward if he stays with Tanya. If she doesn't than she and her baby will probably be killed. |
![]() ![]() Bella and s an idiot what is she going to do when Edward gets his whore pregnant and is pradding her around town. I bet Bella and her child would be the ones treated like crap after all it is the Cullen's town not Bella's. Does she want her child to be tested like crap and to think it is ok for her father to be a sick asshole that will probably treat his kids with Tanya better than his child with Bella. Edward suck and Bella is fucking stupid for even wanting to be his friend. I feel bad for all children is this fucked three way relationship. I hope Bella child hates her father for being a prick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward owes Bella an explanation and apology for how he treated her in regards to Tanya. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure how I would feel about being the second choice.. the one he could NEVER love. |
![]() ![]() this is so lame . everyone panders to little miss perfect Bella... |