Reviews for Forever Bound
mounds01 chapter 40 . 3/26
This is one of the best stories I have read on fanfiction. I hope you continue to write because with this being your first story, you are only going to get better. I am a serious reader, am retired and reading is and has always been one of my favorite things to do, needless to say I read a lot and this story is great. Great Job! Love it!
Guest chapter 12 . 3/5
Ugh everyone's so lame in here.. especially emmett and Jacob
Guest chapter 20 . 1/17
Wow. Not ashamed to say that the Bella in this story makes me ill. Edward needs to earn forgiveness in every way, and Bella won't even make him sweat. Doormat seems too generous.
Guest chapter 12 . 1/16
Twonk? High five? Are you even pretending to write the language hear people probably would have spoken in the 1800's? And I agree with Emmett and Jacob. Bella is an absolute idiot.
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 39 . 1/16
I'm glad Edward is safe and sound. The kids were adorable with him. I'm really having to suspend belief about their reunion coupling though. The baby was only a week old when Edward came home, so at most is only two weeks old when they join again. Bella's body would not be up to that yet and she definitely wouldn't be 'so tight' like Edward kept repeating.

If I ignore those inconsistencies then it was actually very sweet and romantic. I'm sure baby number three would soon follow.
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 24 . 1/15
I kept hoping that Edward would have an ah-ha moment and realize how Bella must have felt seeing him kiss Tanya at their first ball. He made a lot of connections tonight, and they aired a lot of feelings... but I still would have liked to have seen him recognize that as well.
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 26 . 1/15
Why wasn't Rosalie called in as well? I would think she was the perfect witness since she actually saw James murder Charlie.
roon0 chapter 40 . 12/20/2016
What a great ending to a great story. Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 24 . 8/21/2016
Childish, shallow characters. Plot and story development obviously lacked research. This ff is just trash.
Guest chapter 24 . 8/21/2016
Horribly written. Dreadful. Vomit-inducing. Too much. Can't read the rest of the chapters...
Guest chapter 17 . 8/16/2016
Make shore that does not fall in love otherwise no more reviews
Guest chapter 40 . 7/25/2016
It was quite a beautiful story!:)
Guest chapter 17 . 7/23/2016
That was horrible, but I can't help smiling right now. One step closer to Bella and Edward's happily ever after…
Guest chapter 9 . 7/23/2016
She's pregnant, isnt she. The morning sickness, she probably also feels metaphorically sickened from Edward calling her such a horrible thing… her own husband…

This is a very good story! I rambled my thoughts above, but this story is shaping nicely, well not nicely, but you get the point.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/23/2016
Poor darling Bella…
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