Reviews for Healing Perfection
Cleargirl chapter 2 . 11/6/2009
I'm intrigued...
twifanficfreak chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
Great story! Keep up the great work!
java001 chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
what the hell is going on with E and B? yep, let the mind fuckery begin! love it love it love it! you have me hooked. realy looking forward reading your story and chit chatting on a thread...
java001 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
interesting begining. I like your Bella and love your writing. really enjoyed reading it.
TG81 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I'm excited to see where this goes!

Genetic research is something near and dear to my heart. Very unique plot line and story, I'm really looking forward to more!
Ori1 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
An excellent update. I like how you revealed more but left the reader wanting more.

I like confident, intelligent Bella. Edward is nicely tortured, which is how I like him. Jasper is perfect, insightful, lover of Alice and funny.

I want to know more.
avd chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Loved this chapter as well. I found the part where Bella destroyed the locks in her sleep and then waking up in the bath fascinating. I slept walked all the time as a child and I wish I knew the reasons why people do it.

I could just picture Jasper during this part. [ “Alice may have included visual aids in the lecture,” he muttered, and then immediately shook his head, as though wondering why on earth he would admit that.]

I really like the character you've created in Jasper. And Bella too, I like how she's very self assured and intelligent. I can't wait to find out exactly what Bella and Edward have gone through.

This is a really great, well written story and I don't care how long it takes to update, as long as the chapters are as good as the first two I'll definately keep reading. And I'm sure they will be!
avd chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
This story is amazing so far, really, really good. At first i thoughtnreversing genetic alteration was just a parallel for a cure for vampirism but after the strange things Jasper noticed about Bella maybe it might be more than that... This was a great first chapter
pixiekat7 chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
Outstanding chapter! I got a little bit of insight on Edward, but what I got only raises more questions. I need to know ALL of his back story, his a complete enigma. And for the life of me I can't even begin to guess why he reacted to Bella the way he did. Speaking of Bella...she wakes up in the bathtub, has 5 locks on her door, 3 of which she has broken...oh yeah, I need ALL of her story too. This story keeps getting curiouser & curiouser and I love it!
katmom chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
So many layers here!

His meditation gave us a clue, I think...

I just love Jasper...he really enjoyed the story of her breaking her thumb!

I am looking forward to seeing WHY Edward was so annoyed with her here...

GREAT!

Thanks for sharing...

Kathie
Master of the Boot chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Well, this is an extremely interesting start. As an avid leisure researcher of scientific topics and a science ficiton lover, this story is perfect from so many angles.

It's interesting, but I'll put a story alert when I have some more free time.

Ta

Master of teh Boot
pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Okay this is really intriguing! I love it when Bella is strong & feisty. The fact that she's very cool to the touch has got me thinking...

Excellent 1st chapter, beautifully written. Can't wait for more!
ChrisRW chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
As a pharmacist, I am quite intrigued with the science in this story. I'm definitely curious to read more. Great start!
katmom chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Okay, saw your link in your signature...had to take a peek...

Got sucked in...

Want to know the ANSWERS!

This may sound weird, but LOVED your grammar and spelling...and use of commas! What a joy to read such a cleanly written story!

Now, answers...soon? Please?

Thanks for sharing!

Kathie
Ori1 chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
An excellent beginning. I like that you have made Bella into an intelligent and capable woman. I love that Jasper was the first one you brought into the story. It will be interesting to see what happens when Edward and Bella meet.

I am fascinated by the hints of problems that you have hinted at and I look forward to seeing how this story will develop.
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