|Reviews for Healing Perfection|
| Cleargirl chapter 2 . 11/6/2009
| twifanficfreak chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
Great story! Keep up the great work!
| java001 chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
what the hell is going on with E and B? yep, let the mind fuckery begin! love it love it love it! you have me hooked. realy looking forward reading your story and chit chatting on a thread...
| java001 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
interesting begining. I like your Bella and love your writing. really enjoyed reading it.
| TG81 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I'm excited to see where this goes!
Genetic research is something near and dear to my heart. Very unique plot line and story, I'm really looking forward to more!
| Ori1 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
An excellent update. I like how you revealed more but left the reader wanting more.
I like confident, intelligent Bella. Edward is nicely tortured, which is how I like him. Jasper is perfect, insightful, lover of Alice and funny.
I want to know more.
| avd chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Loved this chapter as well. I found the part where Bella destroyed the locks in her sleep and then waking up in the bath fascinating. I slept walked all the time as a child and I wish I knew the reasons why people do it.
I could just picture Jasper during this part. [ “Alice may have included visual aids in the lecture,” he muttered, and then immediately shook his head, as though wondering why on earth he would admit that.]
I really like the character you've created in Jasper. And Bella too, I like how she's very self assured and intelligent. I can't wait to find out exactly what Bella and Edward have gone through.
This is a really great, well written story and I don't care how long it takes to update, as long as the chapters are as good as the first two I'll definately keep reading. And I'm sure they will be!
| avd chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
This story is amazing so far, really, really good. At first i thoughtnreversing genetic alteration was just a parallel for a cure for vampirism but after the strange things Jasper noticed about Bella maybe it might be more than that... This was a great first chapter
| pixiekat7 chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
Outstanding chapter! I got a little bit of insight on Edward, but what I got only raises more questions. I need to know ALL of his back story, his a complete enigma. And for the life of me I can't even begin to guess why he reacted to Bella the way he did. Speaking of Bella...she wakes up in the bathtub, has 5 locks on her door, 3 of which she has broken...oh yeah, I need ALL of her story too. This story keeps getting curiouser & curiouser and I love it!
| katmom chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
So many layers here!
His meditation gave us a clue, I think...
I just love Jasper...he really enjoyed the story of her breaking her thumb!
I am looking forward to seeing WHY Edward was so annoyed with her here...
Thanks for sharing...
| Master of the Boot chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Well, this is an extremely interesting start. As an avid leisure researcher of scientific topics and a science ficiton lover, this story is perfect from so many angles.
It's interesting, but I'll put a story alert when I have some more free time.
Master of teh Boot
| pixiekat7 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Okay this is really intriguing! I love it when Bella is strong & feisty. The fact that she's very cool to the touch has got me thinking...
Excellent 1st chapter, beautifully written. Can't wait for more!
| ChrisRW chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
As a pharmacist, I am quite intrigued with the science in this story. I'm definitely curious to read more. Great start!
| katmom chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Okay, saw your link in your signature...had to take a peek...
Got sucked in...
Want to know the ANSWERS!
This may sound weird, but LOVED your grammar and spelling...and use of commas! What a joy to read such a cleanly written story!
Now, answers...soon? Please?
Thanks for sharing!
| Ori1 chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
An excellent beginning. I like that you have made Bella into an intelligent and capable woman. I love that Jasper was the first one you brought into the story. It will be interesting to see what happens when Edward and Bella meet.
I am fascinated by the hints of problems that you have hinted at and I look forward to seeing how this story will develop.