|Reviews for Pandora's Box|
| nhrc chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
Your first experience was quite satisfying.
In a cave behind the waterfall, not a cliche.
Safe sex is certainly important - well done you thought about it!
The last chapter was very deep and spiritual. Very different from the other chapters.
In conclusion, it was Vahltsooh the time.
| Crystalzap chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
| Meiyo no Ko chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I swear you have some sort of ridiculous Author-Midas' Touch...
| SapphireSecret chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
It's very sweet, I like it. Especially the Agony one. Melding fics are always enjoyable. The only mistake I noticed was in the sentence "And it is staring up at his first officer as Bones bursts into the room and his vision simply goes black that he finally realises that something is defiantly wrong." You wrote 'defiantly' instead of 'definitely.' Also, the British spelling of 'realises' is with an 's', but the American version is with a 'z', as in 'realizes.' So, depending on where you live that might be spelled incorrectly... Meh. Those are minor things, especially the latter issue (which might not even be an issue at all). It's very well written with minimal errors, it flowed well, and it's a good take on the melding prompt. Good job!
| jstkmbr chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Totally got the Peter Pan reference. It's my favorite quote, actually. And I'm also a sucker for meld fics. It's like the writers of the 2009 film wanted to give slashers something to work with lol. Your fic was emotional but simple I really enjoyed it.
| Kafira-chan chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
OMG I loved it. :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
aw how freakin adorable ;_;
| Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
| Ishtar205 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Thanks for that
| AngelQueen chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Oh wow, this? Is so incredibly beautiful! You had me in tears the entire time, first from the angst and then from the happy! So wonderful!
Thanks so much for sharing! I just loved this! :)
| Magpie1600 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This 5 story set is absolutely lovely. It had me from the word go. I loved your ending.
| sharmsindex chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
That was brilliant, I love how you described each of the emotions and let them stay true to their characters but emphasised their awesome feelings. You made me so sad with the agony one, and then whipped back around for epic warm and fuzzies in the last one! I love love love this, and I can't explain it more than you made it so real! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
| MarauderGirl KS chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
i really liked it :)
i love that you make Spock and Kirk from TOS lovers! i also think they should have been. I personally believe that they loved each other to the point of being soulmates, but they maybe never got physical (i hope that they did it, at least once xd)
| SparklyLalala chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
oh...well, this just blew me away. You have a great way with words and the images they paint are so vivid that one chokes with emotions at Jim's sorrow. Ending is brilliant, not to overboard but perfect for them. Wonderful how you managed to make Spock be emotional without being ooc :).
| Doni chapter 1 . 2/23/2011