|Reviews for The Queen of Hearts|
| meelee729697 chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Hmmm... pretty much at a loss w/ this one. - Wow.
How beautiful. How pitiful.
I had the Charlie's heart part pegged, but that didn't make it easier to read. - U did have me believing Bella & Edward would never be together.
So when I saw "2yrs later"... phew. :)
I cried my eyes out over this one. 100% blurry eyed, can hardly see the words, crying.
I'm happy for Tanya, too. She knew E loved her & would stand by her no matter what, but I believe she set him free so they could BOTH go after what they never knew they wanted.
| HellenaNavarro chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
ever heard of talent?
Cause girl you have such a talent in you lol
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Wow...u should write a few more chapters. Such a difficult beginning, so much sadness. You really captured the feelings of loss & dealing with a situation that is out of your control. Very deep.
| AliBelly chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
This is just...just amazing! It was like a lullaby reading it! A sad, tragic lullaby! I absolutely love it! Definitely one for the favorites list!
| momma2fan chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Wow! Very touching.
| chartwilightmom chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
wow, that didn't end how i originally expected it too, don't get me wrong, i am happy about the ending just wasn't expecting it, i was expecting the other way around, so sad, you brought tears to my eyes, thanks for writing and sharing, lovely one shot
| seven9v chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
| Edlovesme chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
That was beautiful. thank you.
| magcheer19 chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
This was truly beautiful. My cousin Macy died from cancer at the age of three and all i could think about while reading this was those horrible feelings of the pain and morning i had felt. You captured cancer in this story and for those who havent experienced it truly get a look at the ugly truth. the whole story was just amazingly written. Thank you
| JadoreJAC chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Your story was beautiful and made me cry, but I liked the way it ended. I was initially worried about how, and if, they would be together. Great job!
| tweetytweets chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
very realistic story... thanks for sharing it with us
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
it was good, really really good and intense...
| twiclare chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Beautiful and so touching.
| S1203 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Making me cry...
| isafortu chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
A beautiful story