|Reviews for Gryffindor for a Week|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
You should do a part 2!
| I know okay chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
| Hotaru no Kaori chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
This is a good OS.
| SarahLuzie chapter 1 . 1/7/2017
That's a really cute story :3
| EMERALD ROSE816 chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
i luv this fic. i read this months ago, and i loved it. then suddenly couldn't find this fic anymore. now after many searching, i have found it. tnx for sharing this wonderful fic this us. good job!
| kase519 chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
| alexwinchester87 chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Aww that's adorable!
| yuki chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
listen to gravity while reading this it sets the mood
| BlueStarMusicGeek chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
Awww that was adorable!
| natsuki23 chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
SO CUTE! I love it! So sweet and awesome!
| lulu422 chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Oh gosh that was awesome! Your the kind of author who can make her readers feel what the characters feel. I was blushing like a school girl along with harry at the showers. Keep up the princess :)
| Bashirisuku chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Loved ferret Draco.
| Allen's Matchmaker chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Will it be okay if Harry threatens to take back his Tri Wizard galleons? I hope the Twins will pay for that. Like Harry, please!
| sumthin.clever.5 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
So mad they had a game of Prod the Ferret going on.
Dog eared pages? Book lover blasphemy.
Please. I think both Harry and Draco are fooling themselves if either believe Draco will not eventually end up in Harry's bed with him.
Aww. I love ferret Draco. He's adorable. I'm surprised I haven't seen a story like this before.
Underlining! In INK! More book lover blasphemy!
I enjoyed the scene with them flying, but your descriptions got a bit wordy.
I don't like your twins. -.-
Spent the night in the Infirmary with him, hmm?
He sat there feeling sorry for himself and wishing Draco better but it never occurred to him to get Draco to Poppy?
Been a busy few days for them. And I can kind of believe their outlook on each other would change after something like that. Traumatic situations have a way of making us cling to our saviors.
It's submission? Draco's? Yeah, alright. And I'm taking a nice wintery vacation with the devil.
I knew they'd end up in bed together before all was said and done.
Holding hands, or fingers, whatever, and such? Mmm.
"pushed his lips out clumsily" Oh, you poor thing. xD! But I understand. My first kiss was a shock to me, too. I think I might have been talking at the time when the guy just up and kissed me. Surprise surprise. But trust me, kid- it gets better.
Smell the scent of burning hormones? xD! I can honestly say I have never heard anything like that before.
Aww. I actually felt Harry's pain there. Expecting Draco to walk off laughing at him, teasing him with his friends. Ouch. Hurts just thinking it.
"His voice was as intimate as the crisp rustling of sheets..." Now, I'm a writer. When I see the word sheets, I'm thinking sheets of paper. When I read this phrase, I'm like, "Okay, I guess rustling sheets of paper could be intimate, but only in a way that a writer or bibliophile understands." But when my unfortunately slow brain suggested you might be talking about bed sheets, my eyes actually popped. xD!
"It was like a whole new state of consciousness, the velvety feel of Draco's lips on his own, the lick of Draco's tantalizing tongue against his own was sensory overload, bringing his body to a gentle simmer-
... And as Harry felt himself slipping deeper and deeper into this forbidden pleasure, loving the way Draco's fingers carded through his hair, pressing their torsos together, every move encouraging passion to sneak up on them, sweeping both of them away and down the cliff-...Each breath was a swoon, the air around them ripe with promise and possibility, Harry's new-found feelings towards Draco like a small, new leaf unfurling slowly, tenderly within him, almost ready to grow and take root" These were PERFECT. Not to mention the last thoughts and words. I gush. Interlaced fingers? x3
Noted, some of your italics seem to emphasize just random stuff. And your uses of the dash to separate specific thoughts from actions are incomplete. Example: "Huffing Merlin, Potter, must I clean out your sodding pockets for you- irritably,..." That needs a dash following "Merlin" as well. The fact that the thought is italicized does show its difference, but it's still mixed into the action. You need both dashes to separate it completely. Same as if you used parentheses, brackets, or commas to separate the thought. And I spotted wordiness in other sections of the story beyond the flying scene which I first mentioned.
Buuut, despite all that, I enjoyed this story, as I've enjoyed several of your stories. Very nice read with an original, to me, anyway, plot. Very cute. And the fact that you could make my heart ache in then gush in one scene shows that this is a good one.
| MxSith chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Oh, that was so cute and sweet, my heart warmed! I love your writing, and Malfoy as a ferret was a brilliant idea.