Reviews for Bleak
MrsBanner chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
I love it! So cute, it needs a sequel. If you want to wright one.
Really love it! It’s almost impossible to find Juugo paired with anyone. So...

PS: Sorry about my English, it is not my first language.
Erza Inu Hyuga chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
Awww! Love him so much! And Hinata is actually pretty hard to write well, so good job!
QuirkCirc chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
I literally cried when I finished reading this. So beautiful and so much passion. Lee would be proud.
Dotchi13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014

Possessive much Juugo?

Lovely kisses! *Blush*
Yu Nguyen chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
You are awesome dattebayo?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
this was awesome. YOU are awesome. the KISSING was AWESOME. and WRITING MORE would be AWESOME too.
Yanirca chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
loved it!. you should do a sequel!.
SeashoreMallow01 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I actually read this story cause I didn't really believe Jugo and Hinata would go. And this story seemed interesting enough to prove me wrong :P But as it turns out...I love it! I love how you anilyzed Jugo's character and the thoughts running through his mind. You write beautifully! I look forward to reading more of your stories ;)
DF-chan chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Awawawawawawaw! It's amazing! I really love it! And thic Juugo POV! Ohmmmmmmmmm!...
internalpanthara chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Well written with excellent pacing. I liked that you made good use of italics, emphasizing key phrases you wanted to stick out. You also depicted the characters well.

Concrit: None.
Kaguya Matoka chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Adorable. a suggestion is maybe you could make an awesome M rated sequel.
EchoCIDE chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
My goodness...

Let me start by saying: Bravo! Simply wonderful. The way you portrayed him PERFECTLY captures the pain and the anquish he felt on the inside. It was a beautifully composed story, and I found myself feeling quite disappointed when it was over. It was absolutely wonderful. Kudos on the fantastic work. And I think I will keep my eye on your writing in the future. Very very good!
Lucyole chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
it was very good i like it its very exciting and the couple is

so sweet to each other Juugo is cool i like him it so bad for

him to have that mark from Oro maybe one day they found a way to make it gone or so argh my englisch is so bad i found not the rigth words i hopwe you understand what i mean your story was really really beautifull and i like that couple
The Jackal chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
That was beautiful! I wished that they could stay together longer, but I loved it. Juugo is totally one of my favorite characters in Naruto, and I hope that he isn't killed off. If he was I would totally start a petition to bring him back! Anyway, your fan,

The Jackal
Mr.felixvolturi-loveme-more78 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
i loved it! it was so sweet 3 3
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