Reviews for Bleak
QuirkCirc chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
I literally cried when I finished reading this. So beautiful and so much passion. Lee would be proud.
Dotchi13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014

Possessive much Juugo?

Lovely kisses! *Blush*
Yu Nguyen chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
You are awesome dattebayo?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
this was awesome. YOU are awesome. the KISSING was AWESOME. and WRITING MORE would be AWESOME too.
Yanirca chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
loved it!. you should do a sequel!.
SeashoreMallow01 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I actually read this story cause I didn't really believe Jugo and Hinata would go. And this story seemed interesting enough to prove me wrong :P But as it turns out...I love it! I love how you anilyzed Jugo's character and the thoughts running through his mind. You write beautifully! I look forward to reading more of your stories ;)
DF-chan chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Awawawawawawaw! It's amazing! I really love it! And thic Juugo POV! Ohmmmmmmmmm!...
internalpanthara chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Well written with excellent pacing. I liked that you made good use of italics, emphasizing key phrases you wanted to stick out. You also depicted the characters well.

Concrit: None.
Kaguya Matoka chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Adorable. a suggestion is maybe you could make an awesome M rated sequel.
EchoCIDE chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
My goodness...

Let me start by saying: Bravo! Simply wonderful. The way you portrayed him PERFECTLY captures the pain and the anquish he felt on the inside. It was a beautifully composed story, and I found myself feeling quite disappointed when it was over. It was absolutely wonderful. Kudos on the fantastic work. And I think I will keep my eye on your writing in the future. Very very good!
Lucyole chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
it was very good i like it its very exciting and the couple is

so sweet to each other Juugo is cool i like him it so bad for

him to have that mark from Oro maybe one day they found a way to make it gone or so argh my englisch is so bad i found not the rigth words i hopwe you understand what i mean your story was really really beautifull and i like that couple
The Jackal chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
That was beautiful! I wished that they could stay together longer, but I loved it. Juugo is totally one of my favorite characters in Naruto, and I hope that he isn't killed off. If he was I would totally start a petition to bring him back! Anyway, your fan,

The Jackal
Mr.felixvolturi-loveme-more78 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
i loved it! it was so sweet 3 3
Blood Valentine chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
I think that it should have been longer had at least a few adventures Hey thanks your story gave me a great idea for my 3rd fanfic the 1st isn't completely posted I have it written just not typed it takes my forever to type for fact or story but opinion doesn't really have the slow type effect I'm glade it cuts my time alot but heythe second one is it's sequel but it's not even posted at all though almost finished with writing it. I get chatty when I talk about myself. I'm either asking you to create a sequel of some sorts involving the difficulty hiding facts from Hinata as well as meeting her again. or asking you to create a sequel to your story for you with credit where credit is due. I'm glad that the review bar is so long if it was an introduction I wouldn't have been able to get that whole thing out. I am posting my story so soon to the sight because I want to become a BetaReader. Beta readers kind of help authors post things s well as give opinions corrections, and suggestions to the author( at least that's what I think what most beta readers do I'm not very sure of how you get the file of the storythough). Maybe I could be your beta reader when Iam allowed by the sight by fullfilling the required 5 stories or at total 6000 words. that is if you want one by the way the names Tamara I put you on my favorite authors list because I have liked every story you have written more than most stories I read here on fanfiction. Oh do you know what Author(alert) and Story(alert) are like is the author alert a general update or just about the auther profile and is story alert for the story I subscribed it for on or all of them As you can probably already tell I am fairly knew to fanfiction. Well hope you respond so PM me I'm not a very good at computers I know the basics I know I'm not a computer professional and am not going to persue tha carreer in that position This is my longest computer message I have written that is not for schoolor being how chatty I am well See ya oh and if you get a message from blossoming berry please donot mistake her as me she's my sister and she likes to be a complete copy cat which she likes being called a copy cat when she's copying me she's very good sister but the girl gets anoying sometimes she does pages on pages of of for a reply sometimes me I don't like to bore people into stopping reading again here's my name. Check out my profile sometime will ya

akatsukixhinata101 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
This story is awesome Please make more
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