|Reviews for Tomas Sturm, Imperial Commissar|
| justreidabook chapter 1 . 7/25
"What is your wish?" Reviews? Then, "By the Emperor, you shall have it!" Wait, penlights? DIE HERETIC!
| Number Six-Sixtysix chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Well, as intro chapters go, that wasn't half bad. Granted Ciaphas Cain's would be pretty damn good, but... Wait, how in the Emperor's name did he convince the supply people to let him have both a hellpistol AND a powerfist? Damn, I want to see more now...
| Madork Gunna chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
From: Madork Gunna
To: Da Boss
I likes da stury, can da boyz come an bash sumezing too? I wanna have dat dakkabox! An is dere gonna be shume otha gits frum Toyhamma?
| Silvertie chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
Very nice, this Commissar seems to be a nice mix of manly and commanding; however, Ciaphas Cain is no hero. He can be likened to a Rincewind of the 41st century- he survives by running like hell and heroing by accident; so I'm not sure how Sturm can be a student of such without being a wuss.
Other than that, let's see some more asskicking.
~ M-O-A-R ~
| Gamma2142 chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
good story. keep it up