And once again, I find myself rereading this masterwork. You've got an incredible gift for communicating the emotions your characters are experiencing, and for creating an engaging, gripping tale even though most of the events are internal thoughts and revelations. only allows for one review per chapter, so I'm sure you'll eventually get reviews from me on all chapters as I re-read this story in the future.

OMG! I FOUD YOU- it! I FOUND THIS STORY AFTER LIKE 3 YEARS
UGH I'm crying in RELIEF!

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. I WAS A FAN THEN, I'M A FAN NOW. I'M GONNA BINGE READ THIS AND LEAVE A REVIEW ON EVERY CHAPTER. UGH! SO HAPPY.

Oh man, I just finished re-reading this. I found an app to read stuff from on my smartphone, and this was one of the first stories I downloaded. I suppose it's silly to hope for a conclusion this many years out, but I wanted to send you a note to let you know that what you have here has stood the test of time, and is just as good as I remember it. :)

update

DAMN. Just: damn. What a god damn rollercoaster of a fic. I can't even. Every hard issue, you went there and you did that and you addressed the hell out of it. I salute you. Just, god, DAMN.

I made it to the end of what you have so far. All the information about the sparkling gestation was very interesting. And there was some great dialog I really enjoyed.

Good luck finishing! You can do it, Chromie!

Draaaammmmaaaaa! LOL

Aside from that, I can tell you put a lot of thought, and heart into this, Chromie. (And hormones). The writing is beautiful and impeccable. I think I've seen one typo so far. Some great editing here. I love your word usage, and all the little G1 snippets you put in here referencing even the tiniest things from episodes and such. Lipoles.

Though the plot of this story is not very G1-ish, the dialog is sometimes so G1, you might as well have been scripting the episodes. And some of the robot “swearing” has been very amusing. I think it was Rumble's tirade when he finds Frenzy, that really made me laugh.

go prime! but i think its just a mistake sparkling rather then forced. still waiting to see what frenzy family will say once they find out where he's been. loving this so far :D

Ok i would usually take more time with reviews, but i'm paniced! I'm gunna have a heart attack if. You. Don't. Update! This story is sooooooooooooo awesome! I IIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT!

I just discovered this story and I LOVE IT! It is awesome. I want though Frenzy and I want to smack him. Such an awesome story, I hope Frenzy continues to grow closer with Crasher.

Someone has been watching too many episodes with Cutie Mark Crusaders. But it's still good. I like the fight scenes!

Man, I really shouldn't have read this chapter at work. Damn you for making me cry. Brilliant work as always. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Yessssss, I was so happy to see this update. I don't think I've ever commented before, but I just wanted to take a second to say I've been following this fic and enjoying it for a while. It's one of my favorite Frenzy-centric fics, very well-written, believable, excellently characterized. Loved this chapter 3

So this is what I've seen that picture of? On DeviantArt. I think it is. Nice.

Okkkay. Now please continue! I need to seee the Mini-Megs! And I need to see Megs's face when Frenzy shows him Mini-Megs!

Mini-Megs please?