|Reviews for Oasis Begins in Dawn's Azure Light Aisle|
| Valiowk chapter 30 . 5/21/2010
I just came across this story and wanted to say that I am enjoying it tremendously. It's rare to find an Obidala story written convincingly, so it's been a great joy to read this well-crafted story. The premise that Qui-Gon is suffering from a debilitating disease which causes Obi-Wan to take a greater role in the affairs on Naboo is realistic and adds a new level of tension to the story.
I am intrigued by your take on Anakin so far. In general, he seems to be calmer and less brash than the Anakin we see in the movies, though we all know that a conversation with Chancellor Palpatine may be all it takes to change the picture completely. I'm glad to see that he seems to have taken Obi-Wan's and Padmé's marriage reasonably well so far, and I am curious about whether his affection for Padmé will still be a factor that could cause him to turn towards the Dark Side, or whether it will be something else - perhaps Qui-Gon's condition?
Great work so far! Looking forward to reading more. :)
| mind liger chapter 30 . 5/16/2010
when you have anakin and obi face off you are going to kill him right, because unlike in the movies obi has his family to protect and without vader sidous power and strangle hold on the galaxys will be droped by at least 40%. it was only thorugh anakin that most of the jedi in the movie that escape order 66 die and that helped delayed the rebels strength.
| delphinous chapter 30 . 5/15/2010
I think i've figured out what will make ani fall. I've been wondering for a while, because it was his desperate need to save padme that led him to give in to his anger. the anger is still there, but the desperation isn't. but what you confirmed this chapter tells me what is. He will see the offer of knowledge the jedi know not as being what he neeeds to save Qui-Gon Jinn. At least, that is my prediction.
I also expect a lot more of the jedi to survive order 66 than in the movies, because what made it so devastating was a combination of shock at being murdered, and suprise that the order was called for. without those, since they know about it, i expect some, mostly the experienced knights and masters, to escape where they would have otherwise fallen. Another prediction i hope to see.
even if i'm wrong, i enjoy this story, and i look forwards to the next chapter.
| Kenobifan chapter 30 . 5/15/2010
Amazing chapter once again.
I can feel the tension building up everywhere..
Oh and I do enjoy the moments with Mr. and Mrs. Kenobi. So much so, that it makes my heart go all aflutter.
Yes, I have a silly face upon my face, and you my friend, are to blame for that. And I thank you! :D
| spirithp chapter 8 . 5/11/2010
Pretty average in happenings of the world. The Senate sucks, the Council is kinda being annoying...
Nother great day in the neighborhood.
| spirithp chapter 7 . 5/11/2010
Anakin watching them...awkward. And the whole thing that Anakin's gonna marry her someday...children are weird...no maybe that's just Anakin.
I'm glad Qui-Gon agrees about Padme...
Yay Coruscant. Now everything will change...
| spirithp chapter 6 . 5/11/2010
Why I skipped reviewing on the last chapter I don't know, but I've been really busy and I finally have time to get back into this story. You've gotten way further since the last time I've checked.
I'm glad you summarized the whole pod race part...it was quite long in the movie. And since we don't care about Anakin it was nice.
Yay Darth Mauly Maul.
| The Lonely Fox chapter 29 . 5/10/2010
Never thought I would see Solo here but cool, maybe he can meet up with chewie somehow. keep it up
| Kenobifan chapter 29 . 5/8/2010
*two thumbs UP*
I don't mind the baby's name at all.
I loved everything about it..
"Naboo. is packed aboard the ship,.." I think you are missing a word or two. ;)
| Kenobifan chapter 28 . 5/7/2010
It's cool that Valorum is included.
This is not rated an "M" imho. It's beautifully done, as always.
Oh.. I feel the Obidala love.
Wonderful update. So much feeling, and anticipation in this chapter.
My heart goes out to Bail and Breha. :(
| Barbwire Rose chapter 28 . 5/6/2010
Aw you mean you actually like reading my reviews? You're so sweet. I know you get a lot of reviews from people saying how this story reeks of awesomeness, (pssh how could you not, this stuff is pure win) and for you to single me out makes me feel all tingly. Tee Hee. Anyways, *cough cough* moving on to how awesome this story is. This chapter was very beautiful, and I must say very tasteful. I personally don't think it warrants an M rating, but then again I've read some pretty smutty stuff before so my opinion might be a little different than yours. I think you did a really good job with the love scenes,and I've really enjoyed the Obidalaness that has oozed all over the last couple chapters. I look forward to how you approach the events in ROTS, (psst just make sure Padme isn't reduced to being a helpless waste of space hee hee)and I'm glad I'm not the only one who picked up that "vagueness" of her pregnancy. Hey, us Obidalas aren't without some justification for our beliefs right? lol Anyways, I'll shut up now. lol
| Maddie Rose chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Aww. That's the thing about love, especially in Star Wars - they can't be together because of his commitment to the order, etc. But hopefully, you'll successfully navigate a way around that!
| Maddie Rose chapter 2 . 5/4/2010
They're really starting to like each other...aw...even though Obi-wan is eleven years older, the way you write this a romance could really work.
| bakaindisguise chapter 28 . 5/2/2010
Ah, the chapter was as beautiful as always :)
The way you write their thoughts is a pleasure to read, and I've just noticed I always form a warm smile when I read them :)
I've been wondering about one thing for some time now, though. Isn't anyone going to do something about Order 66? Now that they know it exists, the Jedi shouldn't exploit the clone army with such an easiness, I suppose. Hence I really want to hope this sinister order won't be excecuted. :)
| bakaindisguise chapter 27 . 4/29/2010
Yet another review from me...! :)
I don't really have much more to say, with an exception of the fact that I still find this story oh so very awesome!
This chapter was beautiful to no end - and a perfect ending to Episode II of your story. I hope you'll decide to change some major events in the Episode I, though, for otherwise this story will bear too much of a similarity to another Obidala story that I love, and I would really love to read about a new, refreshing sequence of events. Of course, everything's up to you to decide, and I'm sure I'll continue loving your story whatever plotline you write.
Please keep writing and share your talent with us, your devoted readers & Obidala shippers. :)