Reviews for TUAOA: Naruto: Rise to Glory
outlaw12321 chapter 1 . 6/27
wow good already
lou2003us chapter 29 . 5/10
I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to next chapter.

Keep up the great work!
LordofKhaos chapter 6 . 2/17
well, another good chapter
LordofKhaos chapter 5 . 2/16
well, u certainly know how to write a good story, some of my predictes might have been right, and some wrong, although i would like to say that that it be better if naruto and his father tortured the ones that sealed him, while the clan head gave them their punishment but then again it would poetic justice that they met there end by naruto
LordofKhaos chapter 4 . 2/16
well, i can certainly say this chapter wad awesome, in everyway possible, i wonder how much better this story will get, ca t wait to find out
LordofKhaos chapter 3 . 2/16
well, that was a fun chapter, the fight were just right, although it seem like naurto get pissed off way to fast, it understandable considering that he very protective of his friends, but in a way that could be use against him in the future, so in a way he need to region in his emotion until he can work out a plan of action to show that he is not to be taken lightly because u insulted him or his friends
LordofKhaos chapter 2 . 2/16
well, it kinda made me sad that naruto has those seals put on him, and i kinda hope as the story progress they get removed, but as of right now i guess i can overlook it, but that my opinion but dont get me wrong, i like to to see naurto over come everything that come his way, but for me he has to do it his own way, but he not afraid to ask for help when he need it, also i hope all those who put those seal on him as well as those who gave the order get what they deserve, but not by naurto hand instead by they family hand
LordofKhaos chapter 1 . 2/16
really good plot line, i like the fact that u put tenten in the hearm, there not many story of her and naruto, it to early to tell how the story will turn out so ill keep reading
marquis.shax chapter 31 . 1/25
wow are you fucking serious I wasted all this time reading this story thinking it was complete and you just toss it aside. This was a damn good story despite the mistakes but I'll be sure to no longer read or anymore of your stories since you pull this shit you're the type of author that's not worth the time when you just abandon a story over something stupid
marquis.shax chapter 21 . 1/25
it seems that you at times forget what you've previously written. In this chapter you said that Deidara told Kakashi about Hidan and Kakuzu but in a previous chapter you said that Minato and Jiraiya along with Naruto defeated them and those two especially the idiot Hidan isn't the type to run away
marquis.shax chapter 18 . 1/25
You do realize you made a huge mistake right? Tsunade is the Granddaughter of Hashirama not his Great Granddaughter. Also along that line of thought I realized something about a previous chapter. Truthfully Hiruzen probably didn't need to copy the scroll as while it may have technically been the property of Konoha you could say that in all actuality it belongs to Tsunade since her Grandfather made the scroll which by extension would also entitle Naruto to it as the Senju and Uzumaki were at one point the same clan but they split up (on good terms) and also Hashirama was married to Mito Uzumaki
marquis.shax chapter 17 . 1/25
instead of making up new names for the toads you should've just used Gamakichi and Gamatatsu as they were Narutos personal summons
marquis.shax chapter 16 . 1/25
praise the branch the smaller brother of the log. Also I hope you do realize that Whirlpool is an Island surrounded by it's namesake Whirlpools so I don't understand how everyone could see the village so clearly after reaching the border
marquis.shax chapter 14 . 1/25
wow that was... unexpected I've read a few banishment stories but I didn't see it coming here in your story especially with how much Danzo covets the powers of the Kyuubi and wants the secrets of the Namikaze which are now out of his hands since he's banishing Naruto and with him goes Minato lol
marquis.shax chapter 12 . 1/25
lmao you know I can almost see poor Hiruzen being so lax in his security that he wouldn't believe that Danzo would stoop so low as to have his puppets raid the office of the Hokage to find any incriminating evidence against Danzo so Hiruzen didn't bother to properly secure it behind a seal that only he can access. Can't wait to read his reaction to Minato still being alive lol
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