|Reviews for Hopeless|
| Anigen chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
i love cook and em together and the youtube vids sooo don't help i'm just hoping more people start to write for this ship. you should write a continuation or something happening to them after their dance in the club or the bathroom
| loudestdork chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
i find the two of them adorable.. please write some more.. :)
i love the simplicity of this fic.. it is simple yet it shows the emotion that it wants to convey.. beautifully written in fact.. :)
| wednesdays chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Loved this so much! Please write more of these two. There is definitely not enough about them.
| crimson sugar chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
i have such a soft spot for cook/emily (emilook?), and i love this one, even if it's unrequited love... you made me like cook just a little more :)
| reddawg82 chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
I wouldn't mind reading a story from you that 'ships Cook and Ems. I love and hate it though, because I'm really a Naomily fan! Great writing though from his perspective!
| MusicalHearts-xxx chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
I really like the idea of Emily and Cook (Cemily?). Emily could soften him up and get his deeper feeling out of him... too bad she's gay, would've been a decent couple. Sadly for me it's Naomily all the way! :)
| JamesDeanIsDead chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
You know I never thought of cook and em's before.
They don't share many scenes really and he's alaways seemed more into naomikins.
It was nice to see something else to cook and that you wrote him with conscience was rather nice.
| Miss Peg chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Cook...and Emily...got a name for them? Lol. Coomily? Emok? Lol.
Can't say the thought of them two has ever ever crossed my mind.
I like it though, how Cook justifies his "stalking" by not doing it all the time. That first line is fantastic and really sets the scene for the whole ficlet.
I'm liking the Cook that you're portraying. He's Cook, he's as you say f-d up and into sex. But he's different too and it feels like maybe you're trying to get that across because Emily and the way she makes him feel, no matter how wrong and impossible, is changing him. Or at least adjusting him in a way that isn't wrong, but fits so perfectly for that situation.
I always thought of Cook as needing someone to tame him and though I am a Naomily fan, Emily would be a good person to tame him.
Oh wow...and here was me thinking this was going to be a Cook and Emily piece of fluff or something to that effect. But even Cook is supporting Naomily, despite the fact he wants Ems for himself.
I do like the end...how he moves on with sex because it kind of sums him up to a T. Cook doesn't feel hurt because he blocks it out, but when he really does feel hurt, he just blocks it out further with things like sex.
I love this one shot so much it's untrue. I really was sceptical when I saw you'd posted another ficlet, mostly because I was expecting something very different to what I got. I suppose some people have this idea in their head that they want a couple to get together and even if it's not right (like Emily and Cook is so far out of canon it might as well be on another planet) they often jump ahead and write it as they want it to be. But you're not doing that, you (and Cook) are accepting that the chance is near enough non-existant in such a beautiful way, that although it would be everything Cook wants, he knows it's not going to happen. Maybe he already does love her...but he's letting her go because he knows it's where she belongs.