Reviews for Wings
dandelion1112 chapter 1 . 7/12/2020
Thank you so much for this sad, poetic and very special story!
Maddy Graeff chapter 1 . 11/18/2019
Idk why the hell mostly everyone is saying that this is such a "beautiful" story. There's nothing beautiful about it. It's sad, tragic, with coveting, stealing lovers, lying about being pregnant, marrying a man Bella never loved followed by death... just a bunch of horrible choices made, no morals, integrity, not taking feelings into account etc
However, it truly is an excellent creepy story and extremely well written. Loved it and definitely worth reading a few times.
But still don't and those who see it as beautiful... IT'S FREAKING TRAGIC, HEARTBREAKING & SAD...
Yet still love how spooky & twisted it is, lol
Don't mind me, just ranting on mixed emotions :(
Nonetheless, the author should be really proud as she has a great mind/imagination. It's truly a gem of a story! Thank you for an excellent story!
VryUnique chapter 1 . 9/30/2019
WOW! That was great. I didn’t catch on until they were at Bella’s house. A bit confused with the timing of events. I get that Edward and Alice came between Jasper and Bella but how? If Bella always wanted Jasper than why the hell would she fly to Paris with Edward? It sounded like the first time Jasper spoke to her she sprained her ankle and immediately ended up with Edward. It seemed obvious that Alice lied about being pregnant to get Jasper, but when?
Thanks for the story. I’m going to go read it again.
Stephannie1014 chapter 1 . 7/2/2019
Wow! What a great read! Thank you for sharing!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2018
Still amazing! :)
I am still hoping for a prequel and epilogye.. please;)
ewamk90 chapter 1 . 11/16/2018
The best stories ever!
ObsidianDraconis chapter 1 . 6/21/2018
This was hauntingly beautiful! Loved it! I definitely did not expect that discovery about Alice and Edward.
Lady Ramona chapter 1 . 5/28/2018
I like this, thanks..
gilmorekitten chapter 1 . 3/8/2018
That was...depressing, stimulating, beautiful, tragic, and so many other emotions I just can't name right now. I wasn't sure about it because of it's lack of summary. And I think I may have read it before was...both beautiful and miserable at the same time.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
Reading this again because I can. ;)
This is truly a beautiful story. So in love with it!
More please! :)
rudy2shoes chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
Woah. Just woah. Such a short story but with so much emotion.
GaijinVamp chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
Great story! I didn't know that lies and coveting someone who doesn't belong to you has such serious repercussions in the afterlife. Edward and Alice were always selfish beings. Glad Bella and Jasper got their HEA.
fuz chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
NomadDreamer chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
So unexpected but beautiful, bravo!
jenr812 chapter 1 . 3/3/2016
Wow. Excellent suspense and twist. I was slightly confused, so I had to go back after the conversation with Emmett and Jasper and re-read to pay attention more carefully LOL I loved your imagery. The "a-ha moment" for me made me appreciate it even more. Thanks for sharing.
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