Hi areianjacks here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you

This was a very interesting concept. I love how even in death they were still there.
Thanks for sharing!

Thank you so much for this sad, poetic and very special story!

Idk why the hell mostly everyone is saying that this is such a "beautiful" story. There's nothing beautiful about it. It's sad, tragic, with coveting, stealing lovers, lying about being pregnant, marrying a man Bella never loved followed by death... just a bunch of horrible choices made, no morals, integrity, not taking feelings into account etc
However, it truly is an excellent creepy story and extremely well written. Loved it and definitely worth reading a few times.
But still don't and those who see it as beautiful... IT'S FREAKING TRAGIC, HEARTBREAKING & SAD...
Yet still love how spooky & twisted it is, lol
Don't mind me, just ranting on mixed emotions :(
Nonetheless, the author should be really proud as she has a great mind/imagination. It's truly a gem of a story! Thank you for an excellent story!

WOW! That was great. I didn’t catch on until they were at Bella’s house. A bit confused with the timing of events. I get that Edward and Alice came between Jasper and Bella but how? If Bella always wanted Jasper than why the hell would she fly to Paris with Edward? It sounded like the first time Jasper spoke to her she sprained her ankle and immediately ended up with Edward. It seemed obvious that Alice lied about being pregnant to get Jasper, but when?
Thanks for the story. I’m going to go read it again.

Wow! What a great read! Thank you for sharing!

Still amazing! :)
I am still hoping for a prequel and epilogye.. please;)

The best stories ever!

This was hauntingly beautiful! Loved it! I definitely did not expect that discovery about Alice and Edward.

I like this, thanks..

That was...depressing, stimulating, beautiful, tragic, and so many other emotions I just can't name right now. I wasn't sure about it because of it's lack of summary. And I think I may have read it before but...it was...both beautiful and miserable at the same time.

Reading this again because I can. ;)
This is truly a beautiful story. So in love with it!
More please! :)

Woah. Just woah. Such a short story but with so much emotion.

Great story! I didn't know that lies and coveting someone who doesn't belong to you has such serious repercussions in the afterlife. Edward and Alice were always selfish beings. Glad Bella and Jasper got their HEA.

Excellent.
Thanks.