Reviews for Wings
Clara Fonteyn chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Oh, my God...

I would plagiarize...if I did that kind of mean thing...

Tell Mr. Blue to be more appreciative...

I had to read it twice...
omgsigh chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
WoAH! Never expected them too be chapter :)
outtayourface chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
This was beautiful. Just the right balance of angst and love. I really like this last line:

"The gull called out to them as they shimmered into the light, but the lovers entwined in the sand did not hear its farewell"

Great job!
Strae chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
This was amazing.

Wonderful job :)
nmnnnnmm chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
this was beautiful, but it made me very sad.
Navygirl14 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
That was beautiful.I got goosebumps...
BlueSongbird chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Amazing. A delicious twist, and a wistfully beautiful story. Now I need to go read it again. :)
nayomelynn chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
OMG this was so sad but I loved it.
KareBear1965 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
that was so beautiful.

Hugs
xbrightsidex chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
I love the twist in this. Great writing.
Manda CullenMccartyWhitlock chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
That is so tragic! I had to read it twice... was confused at first... then when I figured out what was going on I read it again. Thank you!
Cullens Darlin chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
WOW this story is amazing
tmss chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Loved the story, thank you.
mbartos8404 chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
damn... I cried, can't remember the last time that happened. but that is a good thing :-)
ReadourMindff chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Beautiful & well written!
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