|Reviews for Hit By Destiny|
| winterhorses chapter 23 . 5/21
Bella’s not judging Edward’s family and friends fairly. Her situation is much different than Edward’s—she hadn’t given Charlie any reason to completely dismiss her claims like he did. Edward, on the other hand, has a long history of being prone to anger and violence, disrespecting pretty much everyone, saying threatening words to Bella in the parking lot, and straight out proclaiming that he didn’t care about Bella’s injuries or even her as a person.
It’s absolutely reasonable that they wouldn’t give him the benefit of doubt. Carlisle and Esme aren’t betraying their son—they’re finally responding as one would expect of parents. I do blame them for letting Edward get away with so much for so long, and though their son may be mostly innocent of what they suspect, at least they’re finally trying to act parental.
Oh, and I want to make clear I’m commenting on the characters, not the writing itself, which is fantastic! I’ve reread this many times over.
| SherylBolton chapter 1 . 3/16
Just Wow! I couldn't put it down. You definitely have mastered writing Angst, suspense, and created a plot that is gripping. As I read this, I became aware that the problem of Ritual Abuse is probably more widespread than we are aware. Children born into families that practice certain pagan religious beliefs are at high risk for this type of abuse and worse. Thank you for sharing your talents with us (your readers). Amazing story!
| reader71360 chapter 19 . 1/14
Charlie was ignorant in the book, too.
| reader71360 chapter 11 . 1/13
A temper definitly puts you in a bad position for karma to hit.
| reader71360 chapter 10 . 1/13
The fact that Renee slapped her was enough to prove that she had not taken responsibility for what she had done.
| reader71360 chapter 8 . 1/13
| reader71360 chapter 6 . 1/13
Is bad when one of the people who are supposed to love you (and have your best interests at heart) hurts you with their crazy thoughts under the influence of drugs.
| reader71360 chapter 1 . 1/12
What in the world is going on?
| Guest chapter 60 . 11/26/2022
I think you wrote a wonderful story. Very intense and some times extremely sad. Loved it.
| cringe.hoe21 chapter 46 . 11/8/2022
that's some smurf ass stuff... since uk smurfs came to our world through the portal during the blue moon
| Daire123 chapter 57 . 7/19/2022
This story is amazing! Yes very dark but wow! So many nights I found myself reading this and being exhausted the next morning from all the sleep I missed because I couldn’t put it down. Such emotion and heartache but peace and clarity so well included. I cant wait to read more of your work!
| kenny26 chapter 60 . 7/7/2022
This story is brilliant. I pulled several all-nighters just reading it. Thank you for writing and posting it.
| ninny 1 chapter 58 . 7/3/2022
A wonderful story thank you
You have a great imagination
| optional-fiend chapter 55 . 5/9/2022
I haven't finished this chapter so maybe this question is answered later but, Jacob? Carlisle said he's getting the help he needs and Edward is arguing he should be locked up for nearly getting Bella killed. His involvement in Bella being forced into the rituals is obviously awful but has Edward forgotten there are 2 witnesses to Jacob shooting Jasper and putting him in a coma? Edward and Leah were both there, Jasper too of course. Regardless of the crazy rituals and Forks vs Quileute laws, shooting Jasper would get Jacob locked up, right? Whether in jail or a mental health facility is up for the courts to decide I think but either way he would definitely be incarcerated somewhere.
| Paradizei chapter 1 . 5/7/2022
LOVED LOVED LOVED