I mean that with love btw. Not hate.

You are a brilliant writer.

Sorry if I hurt you.

I am surprised by inconsistent to you spell Maia throughout the story on Wattpad. It pulls you out of the plot.

I would suggest you read through Constant again and make sure that it is editted better. There are missing starts of sentences or typos.

I will always rate Hit by Destiny 100/100. I read it all within 30 hours.
Sadly I feel the first few chapters to Constant are info dump. I felt like skimming and by chapter 10 you still hadn't gotten to the point and I got bored and stopped reading. The characters didnt pull me in. Maya (Maia) is bland and has nothing interesting. She just comes off as judgey. At least with Bella she was an underdog. She was bullied. You wanted to support her. For Maya its like... is she supporting her or not?
If she is barely tolerable then the rest of the characters... I just don't care about any of them. They are not unique and bring nothing special. And Joyce? Is that a name given to teens nowadays? I still didnt understand why the oils were so bad by the time if the crash. Just that it people picked on her for the smell...which it smells good why you complaining and Maya just hates the smell like she seems to hate everything about life.

Mrs Morrison is somehow angry with them. No idea why and dont even care why.

I love Hit by Destiny and I always will. It is a masterpiece. Constant needs work. It has potential, I mean same author afterall. It needs more love. Though I don't feel was needed. Just minor tweaks to HBD and changing some names you could have sold it on Amazon.

Wait... you aint selling the original?
Dude!

I've been looking for this story but couldn't remember the name... so excited I found it!

Wow…

Wow

Wow!

Aïe

This was really well written, and probably exactly what I needed to process some really dark things going on in my life. Thank you.

I have face infos about the hymen, yes it has nothing to do with the virginity, but not because it can tear easily (the opposite is the case), because you can be born with a hymen that looks like it is torn, but it is just how their hymen looks like and because it is even likely, that it won't even tear when you lose your virginity, because of how elastic (it doesn't even stretch when you make sport, because the only things that can stretch it, it is you give something into your vergina and it can only tear if the things is bigger than tampons, fingers and co) it is.

I was about 15 when I first read this, stressing about if I would live to see the rest of the series adapted..

And now I'm in my 30s, still love this series but also with back pain now lmao.

Thank you for hours of angsty fun with this story. I'm always coming back to it, and while there are some plot points and dialogue that wouldn't fly in today's world, it still holds a special place in my twi-heart.

Ohhh this looks interesting. I can’t believe it’s 15 years ago! Wow!

I think the author’s note was very thoughtful, and I can understand why you added it. I also can see why some might find certain aspects of the story problematic. However, I personally didn’t take issue with anything you wrote. Edward’s and Bella’s thoughts and feelings seemed realistic to me given their situations, and I never felt that anything happening in the story was necessarily connected to what you, as a person, might believe in real life. And again, while I fully appreciate why using the canonical Quileute tribe name as the basis for the lore in your story is problematic, I had no difficulty separating the fictional antagonistic characters and their fictional beliefs from any allusion to real life.

I absolutely love your story and the characters in it. You’re a wonderful writer. I’ve reread this fic several times over the years, and I’m very thankful that it is a part of Twilight fanfic history.

Wow, this is hard to get through. My father is a narcissist or has narcissistic traits. Edward is a narcissist.

Damn. It just gets better and better. Loving this story so so so so much.