Reviews for The Road before me
Melancholic Marshmallow chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
This is a really good story. It needs some serious re-reading and editing though- there are a lot of mistakes with grammer and typos, and some of the spellings are a bit off. Maybe you should consider getting a beta reader for future works, perhaps...? Despite the errors, the story itself is very well written. Everything flowed really well and the descriptions were very good, too. An enjoyable read. :)