|Reviews for Kinship|
| Elias Milsky chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
I'm looking forward to translating more (I'm Russian). Thank you! This is a perfect story!)
| Hell Hath No chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
THIS has got to be the truest chapter ever .
when explained like that, it would be awe inspiring
funny how it was applicable to both of them
| AutobotCopperShadow chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
| Rose O' Sharon chapter 14 . 1/3/2013
I'm off to read "The Tie That Binds"! Thank for writing such an incredibly well-written, well-paced story with the amazing dialogue! :D
| LunarStar98 chapter 14 . 12/3/2012
this should be like a short movie of some sort of film cause it was awsome and i loved it cant wait to read "the tie that binds" you did a great job thanx a bunch *hugs* byebye!
| Momma Lici chapter 14 . 11/5/2012
You glorious, wonderful, fantastic, beautiful storyteller...This is something that is just, there are no words in me to describe the wonder I have felt reading this.
| TXVR6ish chapter 14 . 10/30/2012
Excellent story. Can't wait to read the sequel.
| WrittinInStone chapter 5 . 8/23/2012
I was liking your story until it became political. Don't know why people have to go there.
Anyway, better luck next time.
| indesteuctable prime chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
| Navaka114 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Was Ratchet was speaking about Sam (it kinda seemed like it)? And Lennox and Mikaela were conversing about Optimus? Or were they all talking about Optimus, because both Sam and Optimus came back to the dead but Sam is the one who has the realtionship with Mikaela so I was uncertain...I'm probably over thinking this...
Great start though!
| tamiiland chapter 13 . 1/17/2012
Oh, my! Ironhide's reaction was so much fun to read. XD He's such a mother-hen, deep down inside. Just a big coddler.
I was awestruck when I noticed that you smartly connected the movie's end with this fic's end. That was SO SLY, I actually felt my heart swell up by the perfect feeling of it all. Optimus finally feeling the confidence to thank Sam for bringing him back made me feel all warm and fuzzy, and the boy's answer was just pure aww. It fitted perfectly.
GREAT JOB. Loved every bit of it. Literally.
I'm off to read 'The Tie That Binds' now! (: Kudos!
| tamiiland chapter 12 . 1/17/2012
And Arcee comes back from the dead with her spiffy attitude intact. That's how we like her. (:
For a moment there, I was scared it wouldn't work. I suspect you enjoy giving me mild heart-attacks.
| tamiiland chapter 10 . 1/17/2012
I like to think the AllSpark is sentient, thank you very much. (:
Sam's overreacting is always so much fun to read, hehe! He and Optimus level each other out so perfectly. One so sober, the other so... spontaneous?
| tamiiland chapter 9 . 1/17/2012
Oh, my God, Sam. THAT WAS SO SLY! WELL DONE! Wow, smooth! Lennox isn't pleased, of course, but it was totally worth it! You hit a nerve there.
Black's fixationg with the Roosevelt made me believe that he lost someone he was attached to, there.
| tamiiland chapter 8 . 1/17/2012
Okay... Sam's accepting his role as a Prime, even though he doens't know he is yet. Steps becoming strides. I like that.
The whole 'we sense each other's feelings' is depicted so naturally in here that it doesn't seem like an alien bond in the least. But Optimus knowing how to handle it and using it to shut out Sam (even if it's for his own good) is just cheating! Be a mech and face the bond! Face your brother and share your feelings, you big (HUGE) wimp!